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Terryloveiris_85
Member

since 2001-04-23

Posts 61
The middle of nowhere

0 posted 2001-05-30 08:02 PM

It hurts so bad inside,
when i see you alone.
Cause i just want to be there,
you're the love i've never known.
Have I told you lately,
that you're the one for me.
But there's still a problem,
my love you don't see.
I yearn for your touch,
gently on my skin.
So smooth and sweet,
your love I wish I could win.
But you can't see my love,
it's pent up inside.
I still miss our link,
when you left i almost died.
Now you're gone,
and now I'm alone........

i'd give eternity to be by your side-goo goo dolls/City of Angels soundtrack

goodness is found in the heart, not the money.

anonymous albert ?

Member Elite

since 2001-03-23

Posts 2979

1 posted 2001-05-30 08:08 PM

this hit me hard!...*sigh*...you wrote it so real...i related to it...as i hope things get better for you

i'm addicted to passions in poetry!...are you?

[This message has been edited by anonymous albert ? (edited 05-30-2001).]

Spine Grinder
Senior Member

since 2000-10-28

Posts 1127
Standing In Silence...

2 posted 2001-05-30 08:20 PM

this was really good. i can relate 2 this.

fall hard, practice harder not to fall

cherish
Senior Member

since 2001-03-25

Posts 1639
swimming in fairy floss...........

3 posted 2001-05-30 08:21 PM

awwwwwwww...this is so sad....i wonder if the other person feels the same way?....*hugs*..you expressed yourself very well..great job on this one...

"Life is not long and boring,
it's short and compelling." -Javier Agosto-

Dopey Dope

Moderator

Member Patricius

since 2000-08-30

Posts 11132
San Juan, Puerto Rico

4 posted 2001-05-31 02:10 AM

Well done on this one. it was SOoooooo sad. It really hit me hard. I thought you did great on this!

I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust.

I'm in love with my shadow
I admire it daily

baby0508
Member

since 2001-05-16

Posts 58
Moodus, Connecticut

5 posted 2001-05-31 09:02 AM

this was a really strong poem..i could relate to it so good..i'm in the middle of it right now. let your feelings go..do whatever you need to, keep writing about it..great job!!

stace_co2003
Member

since 2001-03-30

Posts 497
In a dream world