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n e where
Junior Member

since 2001-05-30

Posts 32
Australia

0 posted 2001-05-30 07:09 PM

I knocked on your door once again
So this isnt the first time
You opened it with a smile
Pretending that everything is fine
Talking like we never happened
Thats always the case with you
It bugs the hell out of me
Why you're trying to hide the truth
I gave you so much
My heart my soul my mind
When in the beginning you knew the ending
But you went along for the ride
So go ahead and use me like that
And I'll smile before I go
When inside I'm burning with anger
Wishing you would've just said no
The weather, yeah it's pretty dull huh?
And how is school these days?
Do you really care about my answers
Or you're just talking to fill up space
I guess we are friends once again
And I'm wondering, if you still care
But since we speak like we were never together
niether of us questions it, or dares.

KeLicious
New Member

since 2001-05-24

Posts 9
PA, USA

1 posted 2001-05-30 07:13 PM

Beautifully writen, I can really relate to this one! Keep writing!!

~kel

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Member Seraphic

since 2000-01-18

Posts 22676
with you

2 posted 2001-05-30 07:24 PM

Welcome! I look forward to more from you

Please check your email for a special greeting!

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Member Elite

since 2001-03-23

Posts 2979

3 posted 2001-05-30 07:46 PM

very expressive poem...i enjoyd it a lot...thanks for sharing and WELCOME TO PASSIONS!

...hope you like it here and reply post and read

...see you around

i'm addicted to passions in poetry!...are you?

Dopey Dope

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Member Patricius

since 2000-08-30

Posts 11132
San Juan, Puerto Rico

4 posted 2001-05-31 02:06 AM

Welcome to passions!
Wonderful first post! I enjoyed this. I hope to see you reply and post frequently!

I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust.

I'm in love with my shadow
I admire it daily

cherish
Senior Member

since 2001-03-25

Posts 1639
swimming in fairy floss...........

5 posted 2001-05-31 02:21 AM

WELCOME O FELLOW AUSSIE

wow..this was great!!!...it would have been a tough thing to go through...beiing "used" is hard especially if you loved the person...

...you did well in expressing yourself...im going to enjoy reading your other poems!!...have fun here...cuz aussies are the best!!

"Life is not long and boring,
it's short and compelling." -Javier Agosto-

knightlyshadows
Senior Member

since 2001-04-14

Posts 791
obscured vision

6 posted 2001-05-31 02:34 AM

welcome to passions!

keep ur hands in and buckle ur seat belt

i liked ur poem alot! i think u expressed urself very well here. and i hope all works out for u! best of luck!
tiff

“A single choice can build destinies,or destroy them.”

Just leave me alone and give me some space.

stace_co2003
Member

since 2001-03-30

Posts 497
In a dream world

7 posted 2001-05-31 10:15 AM

absolutely beautiful. I like this. good job.

STace

I'm just glad that now this rainstorm has ended, and I can see the rainbow once again.

xShUgArHiGhx

Member Elite

since 2000-09-26

Posts 3150
tRyIn tO fIt iN2 mY oWn ShoEs

8 posted 2001-06-03 11:43 PM

Welcome to passions!!!!!!!!!!!

This was such a wonderful first post!! I can already see you got a lotta talent..i cant wait to see more from you so please keep those poems comin

Fading Away

Member Elite

since 2001-03-14

Posts 3131
Lynchburg, Virginia

9 posted 2001-06-16 02:47 PM

Welcome to pipTalk.
This is a very good first post. I look forward to seeing more posts and replies from you. Nice work.

--Marie

"You're the girl of my nightmares, erotic and skull-faced.
Anorexic Beauty, feather-weight perfection. Anorexic Beauty, underweight goddess." --Pulp

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