Passions Galley: Child of the Stars (the light of your heart)

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Sven

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since 1999-11-23

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East Lansing, MI USA

0 posted 2001-05-30 02:46 PM

Child of the Stars
daughter of Polaris
shine your light
into our hearts
as you did
on that first
day so long ago
when you were
set into the
heavens

grow in wisdom
and in power
lighting the way
for all who
would cast their eyes
upon your golden light

grant unto us
here on earth
the vision of
your sight
and may we
always be thankful
for the
light of your heart

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To the world, you may only be one person. But to one person, you may be the world.

[This message has been edited by Sven (edited 05-31-2001).]

SEA

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with you

1 posted 2001-05-30 04:25 PM

beautifully done Sven

SEA

anonymous albert ?

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since 2001-03-23

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2 posted 2001-05-30 07:54 PM

this truly told carly well

......and i can see that..."light of your heart" that lies in her...you wrote this so beautifully...wonderful work here...sven

...thanks for sharing it...until next time

i'm addicted to passions in poetry!...are you?

[This message has been edited by anonymous albert ? (edited 05-31-2001).]

knightlyshadows
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since 2001-04-14

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obscured vision

3 posted 2001-05-30 07:58 PM

awwwwwww this was amazing. you described CarlAy perfectly Sven. i love reading these.....and cant wait for mores!!! im sure shell love this. love ya carlAy *hugs*
tiff

“A single choice can build destinies,or destroy them.”

Just leave me alone and give me some space.

Deranger
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since 2000-05-10

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Somewhere, between here and there

4 posted 2001-05-30 08:06 PM

A fitting tribute.
I don't think my misery would survive long in a world solely populated by Carlys...ah, scary thought

Spreading insanity, one post at a time

My skull has glowing green eyes!

cherish
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since 2001-03-25

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swimming in fairy floss...........

5 posted 2001-05-30 08:16 PM

awwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwww sven you write sooooooooooo beautifully!!...carly is going to adore this one!!...i agree with alberta on this one..

....i dont know you well carly but im sure this reflects upon your personality very well hunny..

..

keep writing sven...you're a legend!!!

"Life is not long and boring,
it's short and compelling." -Javier Agosto-

Marshalzu

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since 2001-02-15

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Lurking

6 posted 2001-05-30 08:21 PM

Great work Sven I have really enjoyed this series, hope to see more soon

Zu

Dopey Dope

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7 posted 2001-05-31 02:07 AM

Yet another masterpiece added to your collection Sven!

I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust.

I'm in love with my shadow
I admire it daily

Sven

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since 1999-11-23

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East Lansing, MI USA

8 posted 2001-06-01 01:17 PM

thanks to everyone that replied. . . I'm glad that you have all been enjoying this. . . it's be my pleasure to do this. . . and it's been fun to include some of you in this series. . .

Thanks again. . .

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To the world, you may only be one person. But to one person, you may be the world.

anonymousfemale
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Limbo

9 posted 2001-06-01 01:46 PM

If anyone can write a poem about Carly, it has to be you Sven.
"and may we
always be thankful
for the
light of your heart"
Indeed may we always be thankful.

~AF~

Just because I hear voices doesn't mean I'm crazy...SHUT UP IN THERE!!!

fearing-laughter
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10 posted 2001-06-01 04:08 PM

aw this is so pretty =)
-fear-

Jenn Cirrincione

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Fl

11 posted 2001-06-01 11:19 PM

I echo everybody...this was well done!!

Jenn

"If it's wrong to love you, then my heart just won't let me be right, cause I'm drowned in you, and I won't pull through without you by my side." Mari

Acies

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Twilight Zone

12 posted 2001-06-04 07:11 PM

beautifully done Sven
you have an amazing heart
and talent in writing as well

keep em coming

hi Sweets, Lizzy, Erin, Erica, Minna, Kit, Kamie, Javi, Jenn, Sharon, Nan, Cawlee, Val, Sara, Justine, Leah, Jess, and the rest of yous :)

Sven

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East Lansing, MI USA

13 posted 2001-06-04 07:54 PM

hey, thank you all again so much. . . it's been really fun doing all of these for you. . . I'm glad that you liked all of them. . .

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To the world, you may only be one person. But to one person, you may be the world.

Erin
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~Chicago~

14 posted 2001-06-04 11:56 PM

Sven~
This was a beautiful poem and Im glad that I had a chance to read it. Im also happy that you came to share you amazing poetry with us here in teen.

"If you should die before me, ask if you could bring a friend."

kaile

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15 posted 2001-06-05 06:27 AM

yet another winner, Sven

i am amazed at how you always make me smile with your tender tributes..

write on!!

xShUgArHiGhx

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tRyIn tO fIt iN2 mY oWn ShoEs

16 posted 2001-06-05 10:03 AM

Aww sven this was so sweet!!

Fading Away

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Lynchburg, Virginia

17 posted 2001-06-16 06:42 PM

Beautiful work, Sven! This is such an amazing tribute. A tribute that Carly most deserves. Awesome poem!

--Marie

"You're the girl of my nightmares, erotic and skull-faced.
Anorexic Beauty, feather-weight perfection. Anorexic Beauty, underweight goddess." --Pulp

Local Parasite

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Transylconia, Winnipeg

18 posted 2003-05-13 05:13 PM

She continues to grow... and while the light flickers, it can still be seen... and it still guides me.

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