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Allysa

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since 1999-11-09

Posts 1952
In an upside-down garden

0 posted 2001-05-30 08:17 AM

We never held hands,
or shared a single kiss,
you were just there
when I needed you.

You were the boyfriend
I needed and still need,
for I have gotten weak,
and I need you.

I've fallen for the boy,
who stands in the corner,
the tall skinny one,
who hides behind his glasses.

The boy I've dreamed of kissing,
but never ever have,
the boy who's Kentucky accent,
makes a bad day good.

The boy I talk to on the phone,
who smiled at me that day,
when we first met,
and still smiles now.

You made me believe,
when no one else would,
when they wouldn't even try,
to see who I really am.

Everyone say we should
"just get back together",
we were "such a cute couple".
and we should believe them.

I am who I am,
because of you,
and now they call you,
"My Justin".

I know you're in a better place and though I cannot see your face, I know you're smiling down on me, saying everything's okay. ~R Kelly (I wish)

stace_co2003
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since 2001-03-30

Posts 497
In a dream world

1 posted 2001-05-30 10:19 AM

awww, from the sounds of it, you should get back together!!
sweet poem, I really liked!!

Stace

I'm just glad that now this rainstorm has ended, and I can see the rainbow once again.

anonymousfemale
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since 2000-02-02

Posts 2797
Limbo

2 posted 2001-05-30 11:15 AM

You should definitely do something like get back together with him. Someone who gives you feelings like this shouldn't be let go of.
Nice job.

~AF~

Life is a mystery to be lived, not a problem to be solved."
-Van Kaam

dramaqueen22086
Member

since 2001-05-05

Posts 50
Hadlyme, CT

3 posted 2001-05-30 03:18 PM

hey
this was a really good poem, and i diff know what your tlking about. and i love your homepage i thought it was funny.
luv ya
~!kellie~!

Allysa

Senior Member

since 1999-11-09

Posts 1952
In an upside-down garden

4 posted 2001-05-30 04:24 PM

thanks you three.
What homepage?
I'm confused.

I know you're in a better place and though I cannot see your face, I know you're smiling down on me, saying everything's okay. ~R Kelly (I wish)

Lovely_Kris
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since 2000-07-11

Posts 176

5 posted 2001-05-30 04:26 PM

this is a great poem and i really really enjoyed reading it. Keep up the great work.
Lovely_Kris

anonymous albert ?

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since 2001-03-23

Posts 2979

6 posted 2001-05-30 07:34 PM

nice poem...i think you did quite well on protraying this situation

i'm addicted to passions in poetry!...are you?

Dopey Dope

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Member Patricius

since 2000-08-30

Posts 11132
San Juan, Puerto Rico

7 posted 2001-05-31 01:57 AM

Nicely done here. I really liked this one. It was sweet, but sad too.
You did well on this one.

I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust.

I'm in love with my shadow
I admire it daily

cherish
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since 2001-03-25

Posts 1639
swimming in fairy floss...........

8 posted 2001-05-31 03:03 AM

awwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwww!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!...i liked this one heaps!!...i loved the way you described him...you did a great job on this one allysa...i enjoyed the poem a lot...thanx so very much for the read darling..

"Life is not long and boring,
it's short and compelling." -Javier Agosto-

SEA

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Member Seraphic

since 2000-01-18

Posts 22676
with you

9 posted 2001-06-02 04:18 AM

this is much too cute

and sooooo sweet....I liked this very much

~SEA

katherine
Member

since 2000-06-10

Posts 365
Canberra Australia

10 posted 2001-06-02 07:51 AM

this is sweet. Don't you know youdobn't let the good ones go spesurly the ones you feel this way about. great job.
katie

We all make mistakes. We all cause others pain. DEAL

Ski*Chick
Member

since 2001-01-13

Posts 141
Fitchburg, Mass, Usa

11 posted 2001-06-02 11:40 AM

awwwwwww! Thats so cute I loved it, I fell for a shy guy but now he's not so shy.

~*~Minna~*~

Learning how to walk, Learning how to talk, are the hardest thing to do in a baby life. Learning how to walk for me is the hardest thing to do.

Alyssa

Member

since 2001-05-30

Posts 385
IM ENGAGED!!!!!

12 posted 2001-06-02 07:11 PM

didnt mean to send this one!
oops

[This message has been edited by Alyssa (edited 06-02-2001).]

Alyssa

Member

since 2001-05-30

Posts 385
IM ENGAGED!!!!!

13 posted 2001-06-02 07:11 PM

OKay, another thing we have in common!
i dated a guy named Justin fer a while!
and Ryan's brothers name is justin!!!
later "sis"

±Ålyssa±

"lifes tough, get a helmet"

Tamma

Senior Member

since 2000-01-17

Posts 794
In His Arms, Harpers Ferry, WV

14 posted 2001-06-02 08:22 PM

This was sweet...Reminds me of my ex Justin, wait a sec...was Justin the one behind the glasses? OMg...I'm gonna

Those girls on TV don't know that being
36-24-36 doesn't mean a thing unless
you got the face to back it up

kaile

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since 2000-02-06

Posts 5146
singapore

15 posted 2001-06-03 12:00 PM

a bittersweet poem...i hope things change and that you two will get back together..

sincere wishes...

Allysa

Senior Member

since 1999-11-09

Posts 1952
In an upside-down garden

16 posted 2001-06-04 08:13 AM

Alyssa, hey sis! Okay, one thing, I have had five or six different Justin's in the past two years. And every single one except for #5 hasn't worked out AT ALL! Anyways, c-ya. And Tamma, you alright girl?

I know you're in a better place and though I cannot see your face, I know you're smiling down on me, saying everything's okay. ~R Kelly (I wish)

Alyssa

Member

since 2001-05-30

Posts 385
IM ENGAGED!!!!!

17 posted 2001-06-04 09:55 AM

omigod! ive had like 6 Jeremy's (but there is only one i really really want!!!!!but of course hes 18, and dating a 13 yr old...so he aint worth it but i still love him!)
i have the curse of the Jeremy's..oh well!
later sis!
oh good poem!again!
±Ålyssa±

"lifes tough, get a helmet"

Allysa

Senior Member

since 1999-11-09

Posts 1952
In an upside-down garden

18 posted 2001-06-05 08:30 AM

I have the curse of the Justin's.
Three of them (J.W., J.P., and J.M.) were fourteen year old alcoholics when I dated them. Now they're sixteen year old dateless alcoholics.
then there's the OTHER Justin M., and I never dated him, but he had a crush on me and kept running away.
then there's Justin Shade, he's my friend's friend's ex-boyfriend.
Then there's the other Justin S., he my friend Jena's big brother and he tickles me so hard that I fall down the stairs.

And then there's JWO (Mr Pineapple Boy) and HE's The one I love. I've known him for a tad less than a year and I love him and I think we might (cross your fingers) get back together.

Anyways, bye!

I know you're in a better place and though I cannot see your face, I know you're smiling down on me, saying everything's okay. ~R Kelly (I wish)

Alyssa

Member

since 2001-05-30

Posts 385
IM ENGAGED!!!!!

19 posted 2001-06-07 02:54 PM

omigod, Jeremys initials are J.W.!!! :cry:
today i was thinking about how he use to hold his hand up like a telephone and mouth the words"call me" so today, i called him to tell him i missed him and he told me he missed me to, and i started to cry so i got off real quick..oh well... love is the pits at times
love ya sis!
±Ålyssa±

"lifes tough, get a helmet"

Alyssa

Member

since 2001-05-30

Posts 385
IM ENGAGED!!!!!

20 posted 2001-06-10 07:33 PM

GOOD NEWS
Jeremy is ....SINGLE

and so am i!!!!!

YEA BABY...

anonymous albert ?

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since 2001-03-23

Posts 2979

21 posted 2001-06-10 10:51 PM

i'm addicted to passions in poetry!...are you?

Acies

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Member Rara Avis

since 2000-06-07

Posts 7665
Twilight Zone

22 posted 2001-06-14 07:38 PM

Allysa, this is really good. Well expressed feelings. You've done good, you girl you

Keep it up

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Ina
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since 2000-10-09

Posts 1236
Quebec, Canada

23 posted 2001-06-14 08:56 PM

this was very good, very sweet

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