Teen Poetry #4 |
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The Night |
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knightlyshadows Senior Member
since 2001-04-14
Posts 791obscured vision |
I like the night the peacefulness of it sensing the gentle undertone of danger I like the night the darkness embracing you knowing that within any second all could change I like the night the company of just my thoughts coming face to face with yourself only in the night I like the night the solitude surrounding you feeling nothing but the touch of the night “A single choice can build destinies,or destroy them.” |
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anonymous albert ?![]()
since 2001-03-23
Posts 2979 |
interesting poem...you wrote the main idea positive then the example of that idea negative...i thought this was very creative...graet job...tiff and hope to see more... ![]() ahhhhh....i'm addicted to passions in poetry!!!!! |
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anonymousfemale Member Elite
since 2000-02-02
Posts 2797Limbo |
The night is the best time of the day. All the cool animals are night ones too. Nothing is as creepy as an owl on the hunt. Anyway, a very cool piece. Seeings how it is about night makes it even better. Nice job, Tiff. ![]() ~AF~ Stupidity killed the cat. Curiosity was framed. |
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Member Patricius
since 2000-08-30
Posts 11132San Juan, Puerto Rico |
Well done. I liked this one a lot! ![]() I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust. |
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obscurity of cloud Member
since 2001-05-11
Posts 294....:::::******:::::.... |
The simplicity of this was very well done. Great work. "so when at times the mob is swayed to carry praise or blame too far, we may choose something like a star" --Frost |
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Poet on Acid Member
since 2001-01-07
Posts 325Florida, USA |
Another one going directly to my library. Finally someone else who actually likes the darkness of the night... "It's too cold in the world...too cold to be alone..." - >¶Øʆ< |
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xShUgArHiGhx![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]()
since 2000-09-26
Posts 3150tRyIn tO fIt iN2 mY oWn ShoEs |
This was a very cool poem...all about the night which is so mysterious ![]() |
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Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
Tiffy girl....me too ![]() ![]() |
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