Teen Poetry #4 |
The Night |
knightlyshadows Senior Member
since 2001-04-14
Posts 791obscured vision |
I like the night the peacefulness of it sensing the gentle undertone of danger I like the night the darkness embracing you knowing that within any second all could change I like the night the company of just my thoughts coming face to face with yourself only in the night I like the night the solitude surrounding you feeling nothing but the touch of the night “A single choice can build destinies,or destroy them.” |
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anonymous albert ?
since 2001-03-23
Posts 2979 |
interesting poem...you wrote the main idea positive then the example of that idea negative...i thought this was very creative...graet job...tiff and hope to see more... ...? ahhhhh....i'm addicted to passions in poetry!!!!! |
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anonymousfemale Member Elite
since 2000-02-02
Posts 2797Limbo |
The night is the best time of the day. All the cool animals are night ones too. Nothing is as creepy as an owl on the hunt. Anyway, a very cool piece. Seeings how it is about night makes it even better. Nice job, Tiff. ~AF~ Stupidity killed the cat. Curiosity was framed. |
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Dopey Dope
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Member Patricius
since 2000-08-30
Posts 11132San Juan, Puerto Rico |
Well done. I liked this one a lot! I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust. |
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obscurity of cloud Member
since 2001-05-11
Posts 294....:::::******:::::.... |
The simplicity of this was very well done. Great work. "so when at times the mob is swayed to carry praise or blame too far, we may choose something like a star" --Frost |
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Poet on Acid Member
since 2001-01-07
Posts 325Florida, USA |
Another one going directly to my library. Finally someone else who actually likes the darkness of the night... "It's too cold in the world...too cold to be alone..." - >¶Øʆ< |
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xShUgArHiGhx
since 2000-09-26
Posts 3150tRyIn tO fIt iN2 mY oWn ShoEs |
This was a very cool poem...all about the night which is so mysterious Good job! |
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SEA
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Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
Tiffy girl....me too I think this is fantastic! |
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