Teen Poetry #4 |
Darkened Chambers - A Satire |
fractal007 Senior Member
since 2000-06-01
Posts 1958 |
THis is a satire of a certain preacher. However, for legal reasons, I cannot use his full name in this poem. In darkend depths of caves so cold there liv'd A spawn of dullness purely made for hate. His 'father,' mask'd in simple minded waste Of brain and skull, was simply there to give His son a weekly dose of empty speech. But O! how Ph---, the son, could use those words To strike, to kill, to burn and then beseech The mass of fools, for only 'once', to teach The ways of God and show, on high, the Lord, parade his hate, and send forth his merciless wrath. "What I hath taught to you," said Ph---, "shall be My giving unto you to teachth to all Who love and all who care abouth that wall Of gaysth. Tell to them the wordsth you sthee, Call to them the wordsth of God. Let'sth hate!" "If history is to change, let it change. If the world is to be destroyed, so be it. If my fate is to die, I must simply laugh" -- Magus [This message has been edited by fractal007 (edited 05-29-2001).] |
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Dopey Dope
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Member Patricius
since 2000-08-30
Posts 11132San Juan, Puerto Rico |
I enjoyed this but it's not your best. Keep posting frac! I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust. |
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Allan Riverwood
since 2001-01-04
Posts 3502Winnipeg |
I particularily like the message on here. Tell me who it's about over ICQ ok? the thought in here is almost controversial, but I will personally agree with you. Preaching hate is what I see too often, and has to be stopped. ~Allan Build a man a fire, and he's warm for a day. Set a man on fire, and he'll be warm for the rest of his life. |
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anonymous albert ?
since 2001-03-23
Posts 2979 |
very interesting poem...i liked it i'm addicted to passions in poetry!...are you? |
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stace_co2003 Member
since 2001-03-30
Posts 497In a dream world |
oh, it's just this? I've read this already!! lol, sorry, I couldnt pass up the opportunity. like I've said before, it's good, and I think you should send it to the guy. Stace I'm just glad that now this rainstorm has ended, and I can see the rainbow once again. |
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