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Allysa 
since 1999-11-09
Posts 1952In an upside-down garden 
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At times it seems like no one cares for- at times it seems like no one wants- at times it seems like no one loves- at times it seems like no one waits for- at times it seems like no one longs for- at times it seems like no one's happy for- Me. At times it seems like everyone's pressuring- at times it seems like everyone's caring about- at times it seems like everyone wants- at times it seems like everyone's drowning- at times it seems like everyone's waiting for- at times it seems like everyone loves- Me. At times it seems like you don't care- at times it seems like you don't want- at times it seems like you don't love- at times it seems like you don't wait for- at times it seems like you don't long for- at times it seems like you are drowning- Me. At times it seems like you love- at times it seems like you want- at times it seems like you care- at times it seems like you're waiting for- at times it seems like you're longing for- Me, and it's those times when I love you more than ever. something new. please don't critisize me right now.  I know you're in a better place and though I cannot see your face, I know you're smiling down on me, saying everything's okay. ~R Kelly (I wish) |
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knightlyshadows Senior Member
since 2001-04-14
Posts 791obscured vision |
awwwww i loved the last line on this. i think u did a great job. hope all is well with u *hugs* tiff  “A single choice can build destinies,or destroy them.” |
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SEA
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Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
I like the feelings in this  |
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Dopey Dope
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Member Patricius
since 2000-08-30
Posts 11132San Juan, Puerto Rico |
I enjoyed this one!  I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust. |
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anonymous albert ?
since 2001-03-23
Posts 2979 |
great job...on writing these feelings i'm addicted to passions in poetry!...are you? [This message has been edited by anonymous albert ? (edited 05-30-2001).] |
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Allysa
since 1999-11-09
Posts 1952In an upside-down garden |
thanks ya all. I appreciate ya all reading this and actually, I think I like this poem a lot. Anyways, bye. I know you're in a better place and though I cannot see your face, I know you're smiling down on me, saying everything's okay. ~R Kelly (I wish) |
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stace_co2003 Member
since 2001-03-30
Posts 497In a dream world |
I love the feelings in this poem!! it rocks!! keep it up!! Stace |
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stace_co2003 Member
since 2001-03-30
Posts 497In a dream world |
forgot to check da box to add it to my library, heehee.. Stace I'm just glad that now this rainstorm has ended, and I can see the rainbow once again. |
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