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Teen Poetry #4

first true love

corey14
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since 2001-05-23

Posts 89
Boston, Mass, U.S.A.

0 posted 2001-05-29 04:21 PM

i looked at her
she looked at me
i looked in her baby blue eyes
they were so pretty
it was the first time i saw her
we fell in love
this was my first true love

live a little everyday and when its all over you will have lived a lot

love me and i will love u hate me and i will still like you

SEA

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Member Seraphic

since 2000-01-18

Posts 22676
with you

1 posted 2001-05-29 04:28 PM

this is wonderfully sweet

anonymous albert ?

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since 2001-03-23

Posts 2979

2 posted 2001-05-29 05:23 PM

nice poem...also sweet...great job

i'm addicted to passions in poetry!...are you?

Dopey Dope

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Member Patricius

since 2000-08-30

Posts 11132
San Juan, Puerto Rico

3 posted 2001-05-29 11:25 PM

Sweet, very sweet.

xShUgArHiGhx

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since 2000-09-26

Posts 3150
tRyIn tO fIt iN2 mY oWn ShoEs

4 posted 2001-06-02 12:54 PM

ahhhhh....love at first sight

stace_co2003
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since 2001-03-30

Posts 497
In a dream world

5 posted 2001-06-07 09:50 PM

short, sweet, and to the point. love it!!

I'm just glad that now this rainstorm has ended, and I can see the rainbow once again.

DarkAngelOfTheStars
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since 2001-04-21

Posts 255

6 posted 2001-06-07 09:57 PM

very sweet

Dont knock on deaths door ...... ring the bell and run......he hates that

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