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corey14
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0 posted 2001-05-29 04:21 PM



i looked at her
she looked at me
i looked in her baby blue eyes
they were so pretty
it was the first time i saw her
we fell in love
this was my first true love

live a little everyday and when its all over you will have lived a lot

love me and i will love u  hate me and i will still like you

© Copyright 2001 corey baker - All Rights Reserved
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1 posted 2001-05-29 04:28 PM


this is wonderfully sweet  
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2 posted 2001-05-29 05:23 PM


nice poem...also sweet...great job

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3 posted 2001-05-29 11:25 PM


Sweet, very sweet.  
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4 posted 2001-06-02 12:54 PM


ahhhhh....love at first sight  
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5 posted 2001-06-07 09:50 PM


short, sweet, and to the point. love it!!

I'm just glad that now this rainstorm has ended, and I can see the rainbow once again.

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6 posted 2001-06-07 09:57 PM


very sweet  

Dont knock on deaths door ...... ring the bell and run......he hates that

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