Teen Poetry #4 |
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first true love |
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corey14 Member
since 2001-05-23
Posts 89Boston, Mass, U.S.A. |
i looked at her she looked at me i looked in her baby blue eyes they were so pretty it was the first time i saw her we fell in love this was my first true love live a little everyday and when its all over you will have lived a lot |
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Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
this is wonderfully sweet ![]() |
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anonymous albert ?![]()
since 2001-03-23
Posts 2979 |
nice poem...also sweet...great job ![]() i'm addicted to passions in poetry!...are you? |
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Member Patricius
since 2000-08-30
Posts 11132San Juan, Puerto Rico |
Sweet, very sweet. ![]() |
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since 2000-09-26
Posts 3150tRyIn tO fIt iN2 mY oWn ShoEs |
ahhhhh....love at first sight ![]() |
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stace_co2003 Member
since 2001-03-30
Posts 497In a dream world |
short, sweet, and to the point. love it!! I'm just glad that now this rainstorm has ended, and I can see the rainbow once again. |
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DarkAngelOfTheStars Member
since 2001-04-21
Posts 255 |
very sweet ![]() Dont knock on deaths door ...... ring the bell and run......he hates that |
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