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KeLicious
New Member

since 2001-05-24

Posts 9
PA, USA

0 posted 2001-05-24 05:03 PM

Uncomfortable in my own skin,
I wish I were you.
Your life so perfect, you have everything.
I only wish for me that were true.

Your perfect flowing hair,
flawless face, model figure
your personality everyone loves.

You capture them with
those bug sparkling eyes
you are in control.

Your nails always done,
outfit in style, accesorized and perfect.
your used to making heads turn
and still i remain...
Uncomfortable in my own skin.

Dopey Dope

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Member Patricius

since 2000-08-30

Posts 11132
San Juan, Puerto Rico

1 posted 2001-05-24 05:23 PM

Sounds like you have a low self esteem. Comparing yourself to others will only enhance that feeling. Be happy with who you are. I liked this poem and hope to see more sometime.

I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust.

I'm in love with my shadow
I admire it daily

anonymous albert ?

Member Elite

since 2001-03-23

Posts 2979

2 posted 2001-05-24 06:36 PM

sad...but true in some ways...thanks for sharing it and i hope u feel better about yourself...soon as the ebauty outside aint nothing compared to the inside

...keep writing...

...?

if i die before i wake , i pray the lord my soul will take-"when thugs cry"

LCsftball16
Junior Member

since 2001-05-17

Posts 39

3 posted 2001-05-25 12:22 PM

i feel like that sometimes... you alwayz have a smile on ur face everytime i see you tho! well... i haven't really talked to you in a while too. good poem! cya later!

anonymousfemale
Member Elite

since 2000-02-02

Posts 2797
Limbo

4 posted 2001-05-25 03:35 AM

Doesn't sound too rosy HOWEVER there is a light at the end of the tunnel. You are you and nothing can change that. Try to find something that you really love about yourself and if you do everything you can to make these points stand out, you'll feel alot better.

Good luck.

~AF~

Stupidity killed the cat. Curiosity was framed.
~ Unknown ~

Acies

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Member Rara Avis

since 2000-06-07

Posts 7665
Twilight Zone

5 posted 2001-05-29 02:02 PM

Try being simple
Mybe that'll help
Simplicity is beauty too you now
Hope you find that happiness
keep sharing

I'm so sorry for doubting you Kit ... please forgive me!!!!

Allan Riverwood

Member Elite

since 2001-01-04

Posts 3502
Winnipeg

6 posted 2001-05-29 11:23 PM

I agree with Acire... simplicity is something very easily appreciated.

Nice work on this poem, good luck getting that ego up there.
~Allan

Build a man a fire, and he's warm for a day. Set a man on fire, and he'll be warm for the rest of his life.
~Unknown

xShUgArHiGhx

Member Elite

since 2000-09-26

Posts 3150
tRyIn tO fIt iN2 mY oWn ShoEs

7 posted 2001-06-02 12:52 PM

You describe what you think is perfect when in reality it is only an illusion...no one is perfect. Im sorry your not comfortable in your own skin but i think most people feel that way at one time or another..i hope that you will one day settle into who you are and love you for you

Excellent poem

stace_co2003
Member

since 2001-03-30

Posts 497
In a dream world

8 posted 2001-06-07 09:49 PM

hunny, you are as good as you feel. and most of the girls with the hair, body, face, and everything are stuck up snobs. dont worry about them. but, you are who you are, and you are beautiful.

I'm just glad that now this rainstorm has ended, and I can see the rainbow once again.

DarkAngelOfTheStars
Member

since 2001-04-21

Posts 255

9 posted 2001-06-07 09:55 PM

nice job

Dont knock on deaths door ...... ring the bell and run......he hates that

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