Teen Poetry #4 |
please read and help me |
dramaqueen22086 Member
since 2001-05-05
Posts 50Hadlyme, CT |
hey people you think you can help me out, i am having a really bad week, and i don't know why, i worte this today to my b/f, to try to xplain how i feel, i don't know if he got it. i don't know what to do read it and pleasse tell me what you think i should do.... thanks so much ~!kellie!~ It’s not you Life around me’s spinning And yet I’ve stopped in time Days and hours roll on And still, I’ve lost my mind You’re sitting here, next to me And I always know your there I still feel empty deep inside Even though you care There’s something from me missing And I know it’s deep inside When I get close to you My feelings run and hide I have so much pain in me And I really don’t know why My heart is so happy And yet I always cry There’s so much going on with me And I don’t know what to do My life is so confusing And it has nothing to do with you You are always there for me And always in my heart Even though we are always together I cry when we’re apart I’m sorry for the way I am I don’t know what’s going on I love you more then life it self I’m sorry I’m always wrong |
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Child of the Stars
since 2000-09-07
Posts 1658Ann Arbor, MI |
Ohhh unfortunately..I can relate. First thing. Talk to someone. Counselor, mom, dad, friend's mom, some adult. They've all experienced tough times and it helps to hear from someone older that you're not alone. Maybe you should take a break...Spend some time by yourself, not pitying whatever's going on but trying to find out who you are. If none of that works..paint or write. I know for me its a lifesaver...*hands you some candy* This stuff helps too. Hope things improve. *hugs* to you! ~Carly "Go outside and use your own eyes. You'll be surprised to see things you've never been taught..." |
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lonely*soul Member
since 2001-04-05
Posts 396east haddam (moodus) ct :) |
kel, as i told you b4..talk to chris..hes an understanding guy!!! and im, sure hell get that your not having the best of times..no worries..and member we can have as many trampoline talks as you want |
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SEA
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Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
I'm older you could talk to me....just email me, if you want, it's there and yea, I've been there too.....definately talk to someone hugs, SEA |
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anonymous albert ?
since 2001-03-23
Posts 2979 |
very emotional poem...and a great start is letting the oteh person know ...how exactly you feel and soon as he gets this...i hope you guys talk it out i'm addicted to passions in poetry!...are you? |
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Dopey Dope
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Member Patricius
since 2000-08-30
Posts 11132San Juan, Puerto Rico |
Nicely done here. Emotional poem! I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust. |
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knightlyshadows Senior Member
since 2001-04-14
Posts 791obscured vision |
u just wrote wut ive been going through last few days! u did a wonderful job on this, ive been wantin to write about this too....just couldnt seem to find the words. u did tho and its great! this is going to my library as a reminder....and i agree with the others that you should find someone to talk to. best wishes to you and good luck! tiff “A single choice can build destinies,or destroy them.” |
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Jenn Cirrincione
since 2000-07-02
Posts 2107Fl |
If he's an understanding guy, he'll be able to cope with everything. He'll stand by you. Great write, and good luck to you!! Jenn "If it's wrong to love you, then my heart just won't let me be right, cause I'm drowned in you, and I won't pull through without you by my side." Mari |
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xShUgArHiGhx
since 2000-09-26
Posts 3150tRyIn tO fIt iN2 mY oWn ShoEs |
i relate to this one too...i really liked this poem...it really hit home for me. I hope things get better for you soon...time will heal all hopefully |
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HeAvEnS AnGeL Member
since 2001-05-17
Posts 168The Hot Girl From Canada |
Beautifully written This one is going in my library. Don't judge a person untill you have walked a mile in their shoes, this way your a mile away from them, and you have their shoes. |
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