Teen Poetry #4 |
scream me |
Godsend_1 Member
since 2001-04-19
Posts 247great state of illinois |
as i sit and ponder lifes many odd things i realize that i am me i am not you or what you want me to be i am me nothing more, just me what an odd thought to simply just realize that i am me not a fake but a real a real me not that one you think i should be how odd, oh well does that upset you me being me and not being what you want me to be does it make you angry that i am me and not what society thinks i should be i hope not cause i like being me oh well, sorry if it does sitting here i ponder what it is to be me and not what others want me to be i act like me, talk like me maybe cause i am only me so i say to you who wish i wasnt me i am what i am and thats all that i am and all that i ever shall be, so deal with it and simply scream ' i am me ' i am what i am and that is all that i am and all that i shall ever be..so deal with it |
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anonymous albert ?
since 2001-03-23
Posts 2979 |
you and tiff...wrote the exact same poem...just differently...was this planned?...haha..yea great job...i liked it i'm addicted to passions in poetry!...are you? |
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Godsend_1 Member
since 2001-04-19
Posts 247great state of illinois |
nope it twasnt i didnt even read her poem till after i wrote mine lol oh well heheheheh silly me but i glad ya liked the poem, ben redshaw the great out! |
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AngelPoet87 Member
since 2001-04-21
Posts 280Indy |
personally i love who you are and if any one disagrees they have to deal with me *gives growling face* |
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Dopey Dope
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Member Patricius
since 2000-08-30
Posts 11132San Juan, Puerto Rico |
Well done on this one! I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust. |
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xShUgArHiGhx
since 2000-09-26
Posts 3150tRyIn tO fIt iN2 mY oWn ShoEs |
I loved the meaning behind your poem...you should never be anyone but yourself Good job i liked it! |
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HeAvEnS AnGeL Member
since 2001-05-17
Posts 168The Hot Girl From Canada |
Wow I loved this! The message was so clear! I dislike fake people a lot. This is so going into my library Don't judge a person untill you have walked a mile in their shoes, this way your a mile away from them, and you have their shoes. |
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