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Why You?
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Why You? |
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Yankee10n20BFF Junior Member
since 2000-11-02
Posts 27T-Town, AL |
Why You? Can somebody tell me What I'm doing wrong I can't get you out of my head Can't seem to move on. I keep having the same dream Of you and me together I just want to be with you Now and forever. If only this dream would come true We would passionately kiss all through the night We would look deep into each other's eyes Speak soft words and hold each other tight. There's something about you That just drives me crazy What can I do to make you see That I'm in love with you baby? People may think I'm wrong For having feelings for a person like you They don't see the kind of person you really are And all the amazing things that you do. I wish I could tell you how much I love you Instead of having to keep it all inside Someday I know I'll give in And show to you what I've been having to hide. No matter what you are going through, all you have to do is close your eyes and dream cause no one can take them away from you. |
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HeAvEnS AnGeL Member
since 2001-05-17
Posts 168The Hot Girl From Canada |
Hello I liked your poem a lot i am going through the same thing rite now with a guy i adore very much but he just wants to be friends. i know it's hard now but trust me hun things will get better. keep smilin  Don't judge a person untill you have walked a mile in their shoes, this way your a mile away from them, and you have their shoes. |
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anonymous albert ?
since 2001-03-23
Posts 2979 |
this to me sounded like a love ballad  ...but anyways...i really liked the way you expressed your feelings...great job i'm addicted to passions in poetry!...are you? [This message has been edited by anonymous albert ? (edited 05-29-2001).] |
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zarina Member
since 2001-05-19
Posts 180 |
it's not an unusual situation to be in.. I know how you feel. ..And, good poem! |
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vixengrl04 Member
since 2001-04-26
Posts 495East Haddam, CT |
This was really cute. I think that you should tell the person how you feel. ~*Nikki*~ ~*Of all the millions of people in the world, I'm just me.*~ |
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luckyducky_505 Member
since 2001-04-29
Posts 53Kentucky, USA |
oh my goodness!!! love it hun!! i'm having the same problem, except with one major detail, the only reason i can't tell is b/c he's one of my friends boyfriends!! YIKES!! o well, keep it up!! [This message has been edited by luckyducky_505 (edited 05-29-2001).] |
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Dopey Dope
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Member Patricius
since 2000-08-30
Posts 11132San Juan, Puerto Rico |
Well done. This seems to happen a lot to people our age. I liked it.  I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust. |
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stace_co2003 Member
since 2001-03-30
Posts 497In a dream world |
I like this poem. it's really good, and it shows how you are feeling so well.  Stace I'm just glad that now this rainstorm has ended, and I can see the rainbow once again. |
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xShUgArHiGhx
since 2000-09-26
Posts 3150tRyIn tO fIt iN2 mY oWn ShoEs |
i really enjoyed this Good job! |
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