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Pinapple Boy
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Allysa 
since 1999-11-09
Posts 1952In an upside-down garden 
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I'll try to ignore the way I feel about you. I'll try to ignore how you make my stomach hurt, how you make my knees shake, how you make my hands shake, how you make me nervous and I tense up. I'll try to ignore the hair on your head, the hair I love. The stuff that makes me call you Pinapple Boy. I'll try to ignore how I feel, when I pick up the phone to hear your kentucky accent on the other line. I'll try to ignore how I feel accepted by your family, and especially your mom. I'll try to ignore how I love the way you look down at me, through your glasses, and how you're taller than me by too much, but younger than me too. I'll try to ignore how I know you so well that I know when you're looking out the blinds in the window, to see me when I'm chilling across the street with Donna, although I don't know why. I'll try to ignore how much I love you, Pinapple Boy. But I know it won't work. I know you're in a better place and though I cannot see your face, I know you're smiling down on me, saying everything's okay. ~R Kelly (I wish) |
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anonymousfemale Member Elite
since 2000-02-02
Posts 2797Limbo |
 You shouldn't ever try to ignore your feelings for someone. There is something more to this but you'll go nuts if you try to stop loving someone when you really do. Well done on the piece. ~AF~ Life is a mystery to be lived, not a problem to be solved." |
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Marshalzu
since 2001-02-15
Posts 2681Lurking |
Great piece of poetry Allysa although AF is right (as always)... you shouldn't ignore you feelings for somone... good work  Zu |
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anonymous albert ?
since 2001-03-23
Posts 2979 |
great job on the poem...and its true you shouldnt...and thanks for sharing this i'm addicted to passions in poetry!...are you? |
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the_rescue Member
since 2001-05-23
Posts 316Japan |
I think the poem rocked and as the others said don't hide feelings it only leads to regrets |
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Allysa
since 1999-11-09
Posts 1952In an upside-down garden |
Sometimes I just get tired of caring about him. I love him to pieces, more than everything else in the entire world, but sometimes it takes to much energy to care about him the way I need to care about him. I love him though. Sometimes I wonder if he even knows that I love him. I know you're in a better place and though I cannot see your face, I know you're smiling down on me, saying everything's okay. ~R Kelly (I wish) |
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Dopey Dope
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Member Patricius
since 2000-08-30
Posts 11132San Juan, Puerto Rico |
I enjoyed this....weird how you called him Pinapple Boy....I liked that.  I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust. |
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Allysa
since 1999-11-09
Posts 1952In an upside-down garden |
Thanks Mr. Sexy. I'm still gonna call u that, ya know. Just cause I want to and I'm special like that. I looove you Dopey! I know you're in a better place and though I cannot see your face, I know you're smiling down on me, saying everything's okay. ~R Kelly (I wish) |
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Acies
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Member Rara Avis
since 2000-06-07
Posts 7665Twilight Zone |
Just slow down, but don't ignore what's inside of you. Exhausting ain't it  Be strong Assyla......Wasaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaap  I'm so sorry for doubting you Kit ... please forgive me!!!! |
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SEA
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Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
This is really wonderful.... I like this VERY much |
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Allysa
since 1999-11-09
Posts 1952In an upside-down garden |
Thanks you two. Anyways, he cut off the bangs that made him Pineapple Boy, so know he's just "The boy from Kentucky", and Jus, but that's alright. Talked to him for three and a half hours on Friday!!!! I know you're in a better place and though I cannot see your face, I know you're smiling down on me, saying everything's okay. ~R Kelly (I wish) |
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Acies
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Member Rara Avis
since 2000-06-07
Posts 7665Twilight Zone |
That's good to know  hi Sweets, Lizzy, Ina, Erin, Erica, Minna, Kit, Kamie, Javi, Jenn, Sharon, Nan, Cawlee, Cherish, Val, Sara, Justine, Leah, Jess, Kimmie, Maree, Michel |
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