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little_krazy_poet
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since 2001-05-28
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0 posted 2001-05-29 01:12 AM


this is like my life between two ex girlfriends of mine hope you like my poem

i receede
into my place
to dewell within
my personal space

i think about
the days strife
the tghing that happen
through out my life

but i stay here
as the day proceddes
in to my space
my mind further receeds

and the next day
as it goes on
the world starts
singing my song

"come back to us
and you will see
just how happy
you can be"

and just like last time
i come back to see
just how happy
thay make me

but it never works
i jsut pretend
and i promis i won't go back
no matter how many arms thay extend

but time and time agian
i go back to see
just how happy
i can really be

© Copyright 2001 Matt B... - All Rights Reserved
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1 posted 2001-05-29 01:50 AM


very true poem...and i really liked the positive at the end...great job and hope tos ee more:exoricst:...?

i'm addicted to passions in poetry!...are you?

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2 posted 2001-05-29 02:36 AM


Not my favorite of yours, but still good.

I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust.

I'm in love with my shadow
I admire it daily

anonymousfemale
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3 posted 2001-05-30 06:46 AM


Time for you to start being strong. I hope that you can be because you don't need to be burnt over and over again.

Thanks for the read.

~AF~

Life is a mystery to be lived, not a problem to be solved."
-Van Kaam

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4 posted 2001-06-02 11:59 PM


This was good..i liked it  
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5 posted 2001-06-03 10:46 PM


this was nice  
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