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little_krazy_poet Junior Member
since 2001-05-28
Posts 41 |
this is like my life between two ex girlfriends of mine hope you like my poem i receede into my place to dewell within my personal space i think about the days strife the tghing that happen through out my life but i stay here as the day proceddes in to my space my mind further receeds and the next day as it goes on the world starts singing my song "come back to us and you will see just how happy you can be" and just like last time i come back to see just how happy thay make me but it never works i jsut pretend and i promis i won't go back no matter how many arms thay extend but time and time agian i go back to see just how happy i can really be |
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anonymous albert ?
since 2001-03-23
Posts 2979 |
very true poem...and i really liked the positive at the end...great job and hope tos ee more:exoricst:...? i'm addicted to passions in poetry!...are you? |
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Dopey Dope
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Member Patricius
since 2000-08-30
Posts 11132San Juan, Puerto Rico |
Not my favorite of yours, but still good.  I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust. |
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anonymousfemale Member Elite
since 2000-02-02
Posts 2797Limbo |
Time for you to start being strong. I hope that you can be because you don't need to be burnt over and over again. Thanks for the read. ~AF~ Life is a mystery to be lived, not a problem to be solved." |
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xShUgArHiGhx
since 2000-09-26
Posts 3150tRyIn tO fIt iN2 mY oWn ShoEs |
This was good..i liked it  |
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SEA
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Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
this was nice |
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