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Words_of_Glitter
Member

since 2000-10-25

Posts 90
USA

0 posted 2001-01-25 01:16 PM

*for Steve, who will never get the chance to read this...*

I love the way you make me feel
The way you make me smile whenever you look at me
When your name pops up on the computer screen
To show that you have written
I am smitten...all over again
I love the way you smell,
With your Aqua Gio cologne on.
Aimlessly wandering through the mall,
Where we've been together, I spray myself at Kaufman's so that I can smell like you (almost) all day long.
Want to buy a bottle to spritz on my bedsheets
So that when I am trying to fall asleep
I'll close my eyes, thinking of you still
And maybe you'll invade my dreams.
Never thought I'd fall in love with someone who needs to be so..."detached"
When all I want to do
Is tackle you
Take you down to the ground and cover you with my kisses
Know about all your wishes and try to make them all come true
But even if I can't come through
You'd still know that I only want the best for you.
I need to feel the reciprocation of your love to make my life "complete."
Hate the way I feel like I have to compete
With your ex
Wish you'd just fall in love with me
Realize how good we would be (together)
How much better off your life could be
With me always wanting you to be happy.
Want you to be elated about the fact that we are dating;
Want you to feel so lucky because I care so much about you--could be with only you for the rest of my life
And to anyone, I am sure that means a lot
Because to me, it means that you are all I could ever need or want
And isn't that enough for you?
And if I could--and if it'd work--I'd give up food to be with you
Then, I would be so skinny that I'd work my way into that tiny space in your heart
(The place where it is broken.)
Maybe you don't understand the depth, capacity, or capability of my heart
But in time--you will see...
That all you ever needed was me.

"Do not marry the one that you can live with. Marry the one you cannot live without."

IsGona
Senior Member

since 2000-07-14

Posts 723

1 posted 2001-01-25 01:26 PM

Wow these are so really strong emotions. It makes me very sad to read you little prefix to this poem and that the last line contains the word "was" and not is.
Best wishes
Jason< !signature-->

"Every body has their destiny...
I'LL CHOOSE MY OWN
~Hatebreed~

[This message has been edited by IsGona (edited 01-25-2001).]

Dopey Dope

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Member Patricius

since 2000-08-30

Posts 11132
San Juan, Puerto Rico

2 posted 2001-01-25 01:30 PM

WOWOWOWOW!!!!! This was amazing. I really REALLY like this one. very powerful!!! Great job, I am going to have to say that this is my fav by you. It's written so beautifully, I couldn't have said it better myself. You've displayed how emotion can just take over one's life and make you fall in love so deeply you just need to feel it back. I surely hope everything comes your way. Good luck and once again WONDERFUL POEM!

I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust.

I'm in love with my shadow
I admire it daily

Acies

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Member Rara Avis

since 2000-06-07

Posts 7665
Twilight Zone

3 posted 2001-01-25 06:10 PM

sad and sweet poem
You've really shown how much you do care for this person
Maybe, you need to show him you feelings more
show him this poem and see what he says
If it's meant to be, you two will be together
good luck and keep posting

I see no changes, wake up in the morning I ask myself, "Is life worth living or should I blast myself" TUPAC SHAKUR

katherine
Member

since 2000-06-10

Posts 365
Canberra Australia

4 posted 2001-01-25 06:54 PM

wow!! so so sweet!

~sugarpie313~
Member

since 2000-09-14

Posts 375
Maine, USA

5 posted 2001-01-25 07:45 PM

This is soooooooo sweet!! i think that you should show him. maybe it will make him open up his eyes and realize how you feel. I did it with my bf before we were together and i think that is what helped us along

Good luck and much love!!

~*Valerie*~

*...Remember your roots, my friend they're right down below, because heroes come and heroes go...* - Creed

Elvenblood
Member

since 2001-02-17

Posts 409
Maine, USA

6 posted 2001-02-17 08:52 PM

I know I'm saying I love a lot of these, but the truth is, this site has a lot of real talent, and this is an amazing poem. I'm literally dumbstruck, I really can't talk with my voice! such a vivid representation of emotion - beautiful.

"Some men see things as they are and say why.
I dream things that never were and say why not." ~RFK

luvnkris
Member

since 2000-08-31

Posts 144
Perth, Australia

7 posted 2001-02-18 07:49 AM

this was a gr8 poem! i loved it!
its very sad too - i hope this guy finally does realize that what he needs is you! good luck ok?
Luv Jo
xoxo

* never live a second without being grateful for all you have around you*

Shygirl82
Member

since 2001-02-19

Posts 245
Ilinois

8 posted 2001-02-19 02:12 AM

Wow..such powerful emotions...it was written wonderfully...I hope this guy realizes what he is missing.
~Nikki~

Hill's_Chatabox
Junior Member

since 2001-07-10

Posts 46
USA

9 posted 2001-07-13 01:52 PM

I believe this to be the one that great poet would write, but only not as great as you, I really liked this one the most, atleast of the ones I've read so far..Keep it up, I enjoy reading your thoughts through a poem... Keep it up GREEEEAT Poem. ~Hill~

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