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Heart And Mind |
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CwboyAtHeart Senior Member
since 2001-04-14
Posts 541Selah, WA, USA 
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This poem has been sitting in my binder for awhile, but I just decided to share it with you all. Anyhow, here it is.  HEART AND MIND Roses aren't always red Violets aren't always blue Sugar isn't always sweet But sweet is always you If asked what I feel for you I could tell you any day But if you asked why I don't know what I would say I don't know how it happened But I feel it so strong My heart knows what it feels And I know it can't be wrong - Cody - |
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anonymous albert ?
since 2001-03-23
Posts 2979 |
the flow was perfect...and the first stanza was swet!..awww..haha...great job i liked it...hope to see more...and keep writing  ...?i'm addicted to passions in poetry!...are you? |
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Dopey Dope
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Member Patricius
since 2000-08-30
Posts 11132San Juan, Puerto Rico |
Well done here! I really liked this one a lot. You showed you love well!  I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust. |
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baby0508 Member
since 2001-05-16
Posts 58Moodus, Connecticut |
awww. that was a really sweet poem. i know exactly how you feel. good job. going in my lib. |
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the_rescue Member
since 2001-05-23
Posts 316Japan |
that was good I liked the flow and the use of the ole, roses are red bit hope to see more |
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LoneWolf Member
since 2001-03-10
Posts 384IL |
this is a friend of lonewolf's and i read your poem. i thought it was very sweet and i wish more people would write/say things like that because girls sometimes need to hear those things. well, write more and hopefully i'll be able to read them in the future. i was going to put the heart smilie face on here, but my friend and i couldn't figure out how. |
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LoneWolf Member
since 2001-03-10
Posts 384IL |
this is a friend of lonewolf's and i read your poem. i thought it was very sweet and i wish more people would write/say things like that because girls sometimes need to hear those things. well, write more and hopefully i'll be able to read them in the future. i was going to put the heart smilie face on here, but my friend and i couldn't figure out how. |
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Allan Riverwood
since 2001-01-04
Posts 3502Winnipeg |
 ----------- I agree, the creativity in the first stanza is remarkable. I love what you did with that old rhyme, taking it and putting a twist on it but keeping the message of it the same. The rest of the poem all fell into place well, but I particularily like how you introduced this one. Nice work. ~Allan Build a man a fire, and he's warm for a day. Set a man on fire, and he'll be warm for the rest of his life. |
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xShUgArHiGhx
since 2000-09-26
Posts 3150tRyIn tO fIt iN2 mY oWn ShoEs |
sounds like a very confused yet wonderful feeling  I liked the way you expressed it...great job |
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Acies
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Member Rara Avis
since 2000-06-07
Posts 7665Twilight Zone |
very sweet poem my friend. keep it up and keep sharing. thanks for the read hi Sweets, Lizzy, Erin, Erica, Minna, Kit, Kamie, Javi, Jenn, Sharon, Nan, Cawlee, Val, Sara, Justine, Leah, Jess, and the rest of yous :) |
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~sugarpie313~ Member
since 2000-09-14
Posts 375Maine, USA |
omg i am soooooooooooooooooo in love with this poem!!!!!!!!! AHHHHHHH *L* i've never been this crazy over a poem before. have you been in my mind lately??? *L* hahaha this is a super dee duper poem! GREAT JOB!!!!!! Valerie Why do you do what u do to me baby...you know if I could I'd do anything for you, please don't ignore me cause you know I adore you |
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