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Raven Skye
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since 2001-03-03

Posts 112
.In a House.

0 posted 2001-05-28 06:30 PM

wrote this in a matter of 5 minutes...it's not my best.

If only you knew...

Walking from your house yesterday,
Stumbling over the mess I’ve made,
I sat & thought of all that I had to say.

It’s so hard to tell you how I feel.
So scared of how you will react.
Contemplating on whether this is real.

Do I continue loving you
while being hurt inside,
not knowing what to do?

Or do I ruin the everything,
that I’ve worked for, risking it all,
and still be left here with nothing?

I know that you are always there.
But you are still too far away for me.
Even though you are standing right here.

I need to make up my mind,
I can’t just run away from it.
Because it’s me, you’ll always find.

I just wish I had something to do.
Or something to say..
It would be so easy,
If only you knew..

*×´¨`·.×*Raven Skye*×´¨`·.×*
"Can't explain the way that I feel. You are the love I never found." -Cold

sexychick
Junior Member

since 2001-05-28

Posts 19
Michigan, Bay City

1 posted 2001-05-28 08:27 PM

i like your poem its good keep up the work and good luck with all the others you write

anonymous albert ?

Member Elite

since 2001-03-23

Posts 2979

2 posted 2001-05-28 09:02 PM

great poem...i liked it and the first thing that came to mind was"written in 5 minutes"...and then i saw the...ANYWAYS!...haha...hope tos ee more

...keep writing

...?

i'm addicted to passions in poetry!...are you?

[This message has been edited by anonymous albert ? (edited 05-28-2001).]

HeAvEnS AnGeL
Member

since 2001-05-17

Posts 168
The Hot Girl From Canada

3 posted 2001-05-28 11:24 PM

Wow I loved this poem You wrote it so well I am so adding this to my library. Keep smiling hun, things will work out for yah

Don't judge a person untill you have walked a mile in their shoes, this way your a mile away from them, and you have their shoes.

Dopey Dope

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Member Patricius

since 2000-08-30

Posts 11132
San Juan, Puerto Rico

4 posted 2001-05-29 02:09 AM

Very well done here. I liked this poem and hope to see more. I haven't seen you around in a while!

I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust.

I'm in love with my shadow
I admire it daily

anonymousfemale
Member Elite

since 2000-02-02

Posts 2797
Limbo

5 posted 2001-05-30 06:27 AM

Spur of the moment poems kick butt.

It sounds like your having quite a bit of trouble with this but you'll know what's right in your heart.
I wish you luck.

~AF~

Life is a mystery to be lived, not a problem to be solved."
-Van Kaam

xShUgArHiGhx

Member Elite

since 2000-09-26

Posts 3150
tRyIn tO fIt iN2 mY oWn ShoEs

6 posted 2001-06-03 12:06 PM

Sometimes i feel like my best poems come from those that were thought up in like 5 min but hey....theres nothing wrong with that lol

I really liked this one...very good

SEA

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Member Seraphic

since 2000-01-18

Posts 22676
with you

7 posted 2001-06-03 10:53 PM

maybe not your best, I have no idea....but I liked this and thought it was really good

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