Teen Poetry #4 |
To be or Not To Be |
zarina Member
since 2001-05-19
Posts 180 |
To be or not to be Who do I want to be? Their illusion or only me? What do I want to do? Lie to them or love you? To be or not to be.. Still the question deep inside of me Do I really want to win? Would faking myself be a sin? If I told them the truth about my personality would that be a victory? What do I want to achieve? Their trust or your firm believe? Who do I want to love? The snake or the white dove? To be or not to be.. Still the question haunting me Do I really need their trust? Is popularity a must? Do I have a life in front of me if I live as the person they want me to be? Do I really like that illusion? Is that a fair conclusion? Do I really have to choose? … Do you want to win or want to lose …? To be or not to be still the question tearing on me |
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Dopey Dope
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Member Patricius
since 2000-08-30
Posts 11132San Juan, Puerto Rico |
Well done zarina......I enjoyed this I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust. |
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anonymousfemale Member Elite
since 2000-02-02
Posts 2797Limbo |
Such a thought provoking piece. The questions asked here are what many people ask themselves daily. The entire poem hit hard especially this, "Do I really want to win? Would faking myself be a sin? If I told them the truth about my personality would that be a victory?" Thanks for the read, Zarina. ~AF~ Life is a mystery to be lived, not a problem to be solved." |
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xShUgArHiGhx
since 2000-09-26
Posts 3150tRyIn tO fIt iN2 mY oWn ShoEs |
You asked a lotta questions within this poem that only you could answer...but i hope you get them...good job |
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SEA
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Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
so many questions...lots of emotions wrapped up in them....I thought this was good |
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