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branden726

Senior Member

since 2000-09-25

Posts 607
Bay City, MI

0 posted 2001-05-28 05:52 PM

Eyes of a Dragon

They look so dead,
Should I even Look,
The eyes of the dragon,
Fierst,Strong,Bold
Slayed for many years,Torn apart cuz of there size
Like many people they were treated as different
The eyes of the dragon only say one thing,
Im different....So what....Dont kill me,
The eyes of the dragon I have encountered
The eyes that memorized me forever,
He didnt touch me not even once, he just passed me by and said well...Hi.

[This message has been edited by branden726 (edited 05-28-2001).]

sexychick
Junior Member

since 2001-05-28

Posts 19
Michigan, Bay City

1 posted 2001-05-28 05:57 PM

hey branden thats a great poem you did a great job and thats kool that it came off the top of your head

sexychick
Junior Member

since 2001-05-28

Posts 19
Michigan, Bay City

2 posted 2001-05-28 05:57 PM

hey branden thats a great poem you did a great job and thats kool that it came off the top of your head

anonymous albert ?

Member Elite

since 2001-03-23

Posts 2979

3 posted 2001-05-28 08:35 PM

very different...but least to say is it was creative...good job...keep writing

...?

i'm addicted to passions in poetry!...are you?

chasing rain
Senior Member

since 2001-05-15

Posts 737
Canada

4 posted 2001-05-28 11:52 PM

AHH!!! DRAGONS!!! *dances around*
Anyway...
I really liked the last sentence...it was kind of...you know...out there! Dude...*whacks herself*
Anyway, keep it up...
MORE DRAGONS! MORE DRAGONS! *breathes in, breathes out*...

-Chasing rain

"If I find in myself desires which nothing in this world can satisfy, the only logical explanation is that i was made for another world."
-C.S.Lewis

Dopey Dope

Moderator

Member Patricius

since 2000-08-30

Posts 11132
San Juan, Puerto Rico

5 posted 2001-05-29 01:52 AM

Ignore Leah.

anyway this was a good poem branden. I enjoyed it.

I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust.

I'm in love with my shadow
I admire it daily

branden726

Senior Member

since 2000-09-25

Posts 607
Bay City, MI

6 posted 2001-05-29 06:11 PM

Hey thanks a lot for all your replies i appreciate them a lot just something new ive been trying with my writting soon im gonna start short stories

see ya guys around soon!

*Tears of love*
*Tears of faith*
*Never any Tears of hate*

anonymousfemale
Member Elite

since 2000-02-02

Posts 2797
Limbo

7 posted 2001-05-30 08:09 AM

No, don't ignore Leah.

Not the best piece I have seen from you, Brandon. Your title is wonderful though.

Thanks for the read.

~AF~

Life is a mystery to be lived, not a problem to be solved."
-Van Kaam

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