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0 posted 2001-05-28 03:07 AM


i try to change just for you.
but it doesn't work.
i said i would never change but i did.
my hair,my clothes,my style
i changed it all for you.

i promised my self i would never change,
but i did and it was all for you.
i use to be nothing.
now i am sumthing.
cus i changed.

i want to thank you.
you helped me change.
now i am a little short punk chic with attitude.
i'm aggressive.
i'm violent.
all because you i changed for you.

this is me now cus i have changed!
if you believed this your very gulliable.
cus i know i am who i am and i'll never change.
i am robin and that is who i will always be!


robin

I AM WHAT I AM SO DEAL!

© Copyright 2001 Robin Hill - All Rights Reserved
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1 posted 2001-05-28 03:11 AM


hey yall hope you like this one.
robin

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2 posted 2001-05-28 04:07 AM


GOod message....always be yourself. Stay true to you.
Well done.

I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust.

I'm in love with my shadow
I admire it daily

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3 posted 2001-05-28 11:45 AM


Great work Robin I really enjoyed the read.  
Zu

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4 posted 2001-05-28 12:43 PM


Good to see you are so positive. Don't ever change unless it involves large quantities of money.   jk

~AF~

Know what you want. Become your real self.
~ David Harold Fink ~

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5 posted 2001-05-28 01:51 PM


message was nice...and great job on writing this...i enjoyed your thought made me think about things...keep writing tho ...?

i'm addicted to passions in poetry!...are you?

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6 posted 2001-05-28 03:20 PM


really good message behind it..

I actually did *try* to change my personality for someone, but it never worked....

but that's just me!!  
keep writing!!
*s*
Stace

I'm just glad that now this rainstorm has ended, and I can see the rainbow once again.

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7 posted 2001-06-01 12:37 PM


i almost did for a guy can you believe that! never again!
robin

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