With The Setting Of The Sun

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LoneWolf
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since 2001-03-10

Posts 384
IL

0 posted 2001-05-30 12:36 PM

"With the Setting of the Sun"

Beyond the horizon
With the sorrows of the setting sun
I remember days of old
And how we used to be

Gazing unto the evening sky
Left with endless questions
Each one only answered with a "why"

Staring at the sunset
With its fiery lights
Like the way my heart once felt
Upon those winter nights

Peering at the fading sun
As it leaves this day behind
But knowing it shall rise again

Looking at that blazing orb
Fading beyond the sea
Wondering if our love shall rise agan
Or fade with the setting of the sun

It's too bad I'm not as wonderful a person as people say I am, because the world could use a few people like that.
I've learned that even when you th

stace_co2003
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since 2001-03-30

Posts 497
In a dream world

1 posted 2001-05-30 02:03 PM

sorry, i was going to reply earlier, but my eyes started to hurt, so I had to take a break.
but anyway, I like this poem..and into my library it goes.
keep writing..
Stace

I'm just glad that now this rainstorm has ended, and I can see the rainbow once again.

knightlyshadows
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since 2001-04-14

Posts 791
obscured vision

2 posted 2001-05-30 02:07 PM

great imagery on this. i liked how u used ur love with the sun. this was well written and the flow was nice to me. i liked it alot and its in my library! great work!
tiff

“A single choice can build destinies,or destroy them.”

Just leave me alone and give me some space.

the_rescue
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since 2001-05-23

Posts 316
Japan

3 posted 2001-05-30 02:10 PM

wow I really like the imagery and the symbols used in this poem it really rocks

Dopey Dope

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Member Patricius

since 2000-08-30

Posts 11132
San Juan, Puerto Rico

4 posted 2001-05-31 01:46 AM

Well done here. i really liked this one a lot. You are writing well lately. I see a lot of improvement in your poems.

I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust.

I'm in love with my shadow
I admire it daily

anonymous albert ?

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since 2001-03-23

Posts 2979

5 posted 2001-05-31 02:11 AM

beautiful imagery...graet job on writing this...i liked it lots...bye

i'm addicted to passions in poetry!...are you?

cherish
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since 2001-03-25

Posts 1639
swimming in fairy floss...........

6 posted 2001-05-31 02:13 AM

Wondering if our love shall rise agan
Or fade with the setting of the sun
wonderful work on the imagery here lone....well done on this poem...you did really really well on it..