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princess^sarah Member
since 2001-01-12
Posts 131melbourne 
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Forget his name Forget his face Forget his kiss.... And warm embrace Forget the love That once was true Remember now Theres someone new. For he's gone now.... Gone now.. forever |
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fozzyozzy Member
since 2001-03-15
Posts 336Lessburg Virginia |
Wow I really loved this poem. The rhyme and flow is perfect. This is good. What else is there to say. "The heart can think of no devotion |
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stace_co2003 Member
since 2001-03-30
Posts 497In a dream world |
it's really good, and it's not as explosive as your other about your friend... by the way, out of curiousity, how are things between you and your friend?  *s* Stace I'm just glad that now this rainstorm has ended, and I can see the rainbow once again. |
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anonymous albert ?
since 2001-03-23
Posts 2979 |
short but very powerful!...im glad you finally over this guy...thats stressing the you know what out of you...life like that you move on when you gotta move on...great job in expressing your feeling here...i liked this poem a lot  ...keep writing sarah  ...?i'm addicted to passions in poetry!...are you? |
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Dopey Dope
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Member Patricius
since 2000-08-30
Posts 11132San Juan, Puerto Rico |
Nicely done here. I liked this one a lot. Flowed well.  I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust. |
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Marshalzu 
since 2001-02-15
Posts 2681Lurking |
Well done another great piece from you Princess Sarah, keep on posting Zu |
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anonymousfemale Member Elite
since 2000-02-02
Posts 2797Limbo |
That's right, Sarah. Old people should be forgotten and you should move on. Good piece all the same. ~AF~ Know what you want. Become your real self. |
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kaile
since 2000-02-06
Posts 5146singapore |
a short intense piece that says it all... reminds me of what robert frost once said: life goes on... [This message has been edited by faterider (edited 05-28-2001).] |
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Hacas Junior Member
since 2001-05-05
Posts 25 |
Great poem my princess!  Keep up the good work *cheers* Love Ryan "Fight for what you believe in" |
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