Teen Poetry #4 |
Megan Brooke |
MoeRocko Member
since 2001-04-25
Posts 166West Virginia |
All I have and all I do Cannot compare to the love of you You make me feel alive You are my highest high All I can do is smile When I look into your eyes You're my star, even when you are far You're not alone, because your heart is my home You are my biggest prize So beautiful and wise All I want to do, when I see you Is to see you smile When I look into your eyes This Is Not Here |
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stace_co2003 Member
since 2001-03-30
Posts 497In a dream world |
this is really wonderful, and it's full of heart. you've done a wonderful job on this, and I hope to read more in the really near future! *s* Stace I'm just glad that now this rainstorm has ended, and I can see the rainbow once again. |
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Sparkie4PLUR New Member
since 2001-05-03
Posts 8 |
Wow this is a great poem, full of love Makes me think of my b/f Keep up the good work. PLUR Sparkie "The music will never stop, the heartbeat will never fade, the party will NEVER end" |
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anonymous albert ?
since 2001-03-23
Posts 2979 |
sweet poem...nicely expressed...great job and i enjoyed it quite a bit...keep writing ...? i'm addicted to passions in poetry!...are you? |
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Dopey Dope
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Member Patricius
since 2000-08-30
Posts 11132San Juan, Puerto Rico |
Very sweet poem. Awwwwww very nice. I liked this one. I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust. |
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anonymousfemale Member Elite
since 2000-02-02
Posts 2797Limbo |
Aw this is so sweet. Nicely done. ~AF~ Know what you want. Become your real self. |
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