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HeAvEnS AnGeL
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since 2001-05-17

Posts 168
The Hot Girl From Canada

0 posted 2001-05-27 04:27 PM

I was inspierd to write this poem becoz of 1 eventful evening last nite. I hoe you all like it for it is one of my "happier" poems.

Used and abused,
Tatterd and torn.
I came home and cryed last night,
My feelings were lost and forlorn.

You chased after me,
Untill One o'clock last night.
When I finally let you in,
That's where it all began.

You held me in your arms,
While my tears swelled in my eyes.
I did not want to live anymore,
I wished that I would die.

I have lost a lot of things this year,
My grandma, cousin, and friends.
But the way you looked at me last night,
I knew I'd make it to the end.

"My uncle is dying," I told you,
I wish that I was there.
I'm glad that you are here with me,
So my feelings I could share.

I know I can never be with you,
But I am happy that you are my friend.
Because I know you will be here,
Untill the very end.

So even though I love you,
My heart for you I'll bend.
As long as your here for me,
Forever as my friend.

Don't judge a person untill you have walked a mile in their shoes, this way your a mile away from them, and you have their shoes.

stace_co2003
Member

since 2001-03-30

Posts 497
In a dream world

1 posted 2001-05-27 04:40 PM

I don't even know where to begin. it's a wonderful poem full of emotion, and it's really very sad...if this is one of your "happier" poems, I think I'd get depressed majorly to read any others!!
*s*
Stace

I'm just glad that now this rainstorm has ended, and I can see the rainbow once again.

Sparkie4PLUR
New Member

since 2001-05-03

Posts 8

2 posted 2001-05-27 05:39 PM

This is a beautiful poem, its nice to have those people who are always there for you

Hope things are alright your way, if you need anyone to talk to, Im always here!! I dont give the best advice, but I have two ears that listen very well

Anyways, wonderful poem, cant wait to see more

PLUR,
Sparkie
"The music will never stop, the heartbeat will never fade, the party will never end."

Deranger
Member

since 2000-05-10

Posts 498
Somewhere, between here and there

3 posted 2001-05-27 06:26 PM

Yes. This is beauty, exposed, desperate and raw. Reminds me of what humanity could be, but never will.

Spreading insanity, one post at a time

My skull has glowing green eyes!

anonymous albert ?

Member Elite

since 2001-03-23

Posts 2979

4 posted 2001-05-27 06:52 PM

beautiful...yet emotional poem...i liked the negative to positive...great job...and i liked the poem alot...thanks for the read and hope to see more

...?

i'm addicted to passions in poetry!...are you?

Dopey Dope

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Member Patricius

since 2000-08-30

Posts 11132
San Juan, Puerto Rico

5 posted 2001-05-28 12:33 PM

Very well done here. I thought it was sweet.

I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust.

I'm in love with my shadow
I admire it daily

anonymousfemale
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since 2000-02-02

Posts 2797
Limbo

6 posted 2001-05-28 02:24 AM

Sorry for your losses but it is so great for you that this person chased after you to make sure you were fine. You've written a very nice poem.

~AF~

Know what you want. Become your real self.
~ David Harold Fink ~

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