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Angel Bee Member
since 2001-01-30
Posts 176Virginia |
this is kinda dumb and stupid and not well written, i've lost my desire to write. i might find it again but who knows. so heres the really bad poem. ab You'll never know i'm so glad that we were friends first when you go it won't leave so much hurt and if you decide to leave me today yeah, it'll hurt but i'll be okay tears i may cry for you will never show sure it might hurt but you'll never know *~"Sometimes I wish I was a little girl again--because bruised knees heal faster than broken hearts."~* |
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Dopey Dope
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Member Patricius
since 2000-08-30
Posts 11132San Juan, Puerto Rico |
Well done here. I liked this one. It's not stupid or dumb at all.....be proud of your poems.  I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust. |
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anonymous albert ?
since 2001-03-23
Posts 2979 |
yea...i think you still have the desire...you might be going through writers block...like me!  ...hehe and it wasnt stupid and dumb...it was a nice...graet job and keep writing...well when you do  ...  ...?ahhhhh....i'm addicted to passions in poetry!!!!! |
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fozzyozzy Member
since 2001-03-15
Posts 336Lessburg Virginia |
Don't be hard on yourself. I know I can be gone for weeks at a time from Passions. It's no big sin. Besides this poem isn't so bad. actually good. Take a break if you feel your work is suffering. no sense exhausting yourself even more. foozyoozy "The heart can think of no devotion |
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princess^sarah Member
since 2001-01-12
Posts 131melbourne |
gewd work!!! |
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