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you tell me you love me
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you tell me you love me |
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punkrockerrobin 
since 2001-05-15
Posts 1180Sparks, NV 
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You tell me you love me, What am i to believe? All i've heard from you is lies. Please tell me you aren't lieing. You really love me, Look me in the eyes and tell me. I need to know the truth. So far all i've gotten is heartache! I love you!Can't you see that? I want to be with you! I want you to call me yours! So please i ask of you.......... Do you love me? Am i yours? Tell me i need to know. Robin  |
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LoveBug
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Member Elite
since 2000-01-08
Posts 4697 |
The pain and confusion you're feeling really come through in this piece. It's hard to be with someone who doesn't like to say what you need to hear. I hope things work out for you. Thanks for sharing.  "Men judge generally more by the eye than by the hand, for everyone can see and few can feel."-Machiavelli |
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anonymous albert ?
since 2001-03-23
Posts 2979 |
great job on the poem...this is a hard situation...hope things turn out well...and keep writing...  ...?ahhhhh....i'm addicted to passions in poetry!!!!! |
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Dopey Dope
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Member Patricius
since 2000-08-30
Posts 11132San Juan, Puerto Rico |
Well done, but sad. I hope all things get better.  I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust. |
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kaile
since 2000-02-06
Posts 5146singapore |
i read and i heard...that must have been hard to write...i applaude for your courage and hope that things turn for the better... |
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