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Lucy
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Lucy |
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Ski*Chick Member
since 2001-01-13
Posts 141Fitchburg, Mass, Usa |
You look at me with those big eyes, you never tell a soul what I tell you I want to thank you for always being there, for me Lucy you never lie Lucy you always have your ears open Lucy everyone adores you online You are my pet healer you make me laugh when I'm sad you can't talk but some how you tell me that you love me Your so soft you now have to have your own email addy because of your emails from people I wrote a story about you people love it while you sleep all day You don't care what kind of muisc I like your my special friend we will always be best friends for life When you had cancer all I thought was losing my best friend but the doctor took off your toe Now your better your back to yourself I'm happy Remember when dad would give you a second breakfast? you'd give him paw so he'd give you more he loved you You and him were peanut butter and jelly but now he's watching us thanks for being my friend. It's hard seeing someone loving your ex, when it's your ex friend who's loving him. |
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anonymous albert ?
since 2001-03-23
Posts 2979 |
sad yet sweet...she must be a special person  ...nice tribute...i hope you gave this to her...thanks for sharing it and keepw riting...  ...?ahhhhh....i'm addicted to passions in poetry!!!!! |
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anonymousfemale Member Elite
since 2000-02-02
Posts 2797Limbo |
This is such a touching piece.  I hope your friend knows all of these things. ~AF~ Stupidity killed the cat. Curiosity was framed. |
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Dopey Dope
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Member Patricius
since 2000-08-30
Posts 11132San Juan, Puerto Rico |
Very sad poem here...I liked it though.  I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust. |
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kaile
since 2000-02-06
Posts 5146singapore |
tell me if i am wrong but is this a tribute to a beloved pet?? this almost reads like a journal entry..thank you for sharing |
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