Dark Angel: The After Sting ( 2 of 11 )

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Poet on Acid
Member

since 2001-01-07

Posts 325
Florida, USA

0 posted 2001-05-26 04:17 AM

Again, this is not about me but a fictional girl. Though these things didn't really happen to this person they do to others which is one of the reasons this story needs to be told.

Do you know what pain is?
really
do you know?
This is pain
Pain is
when your beaten day after day
by your own
father
Pain is
when your heart aches
and never will stop
Pain is
What I feel
everyday
Pain is
what I live on
I have no rest
This is pain

"It's too cold in the world...too cold to be alone..." - >¶ØÊ†<

kaile

Member Ascendant

since 2000-02-06

Posts 5146
singapore

1 posted 2001-05-26 08:11 AM

i agree whole-heartedly...child abuse is one of the sickest things that can happen and if awareness can be raised, then why not?

write on!

anonymous albert ?

Member Elite

since 2001-03-23

Posts 2979

2 posted 2001-05-26 03:30 PM

hey...this was quite powerful...hit me hard...and child abuse is a sad thing that goes on in society...and the victims usually go unknown...and you expressed it so well...awesome job...thanks for sharing this

...hope to see more...

...?

ahhhhh....i'm addicted to passions in poetry!!!!!

Deranger
Member

since 2000-05-10

Posts 498
Somewhere, between here and there

3 posted 2001-05-26 05:59 PM

I agree. Child abusers are scum.

About the poem, though--i really like the abrupt nature of the peace, it adds a sort of violence...which, goes a long way to convey your message. yay for you!

Spreading insanity, one post at a time

My skull has glowing green eyes!

Dopey Dope

Moderator

Member Patricius

since 2000-08-30

Posts 11132
San Juan, Puerto Rico

4 posted 2001-05-26 08:57 PM

Wow this was raw. It was good, I liked it a lot.

I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust.

I'm in love with my shadow
I admire it daily

fearing-laughter
Senior Member

since 2001-04-24

Posts 605
land of cheese (Wisconsin)

5 posted 2001-05-26 11:42 PM

this is my favorite of the series so far. this things rock! it's seriously pissing me off though that they're banning some of them...sorry about that. keep writing even if they do block some of them!
-fear-

anonymousfemale
Member Elite

since 2000-02-02

Posts 2797
Limbo

6 posted 2001-05-27 07:58 AM

There is nothing worse than parents that abuse their children. You're expressing yourself well.

Keep 'em coming.

~AF~

"I'm not a slave to a God that doesn't exist."
Manson - The Fight Song

vixengrl04
Member

since 2001-04-26

Posts 495
East Haddam, CT

7 posted 2001-05-27 11:53 AM

Awww this is sad..I wonder what is to come?? U'r gonna do 11 of these?? Whoa..

~*Nikki*~

~*Of all the millions of people in the world, I'm just me.*~

cherish
Senior Member

since 2001-03-25

Posts 1639
swimming in fairy floss...........

8 posted 2001-05-28 09:44 PM

ok..im crying now

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