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MoeRocko
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since 2001-04-25
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0 posted 2001-05-26 01:54 AM



You say you love me, yes you do
But you know not who you talk to
You're selling me a pack of lies
and I've purchased one in every size

You say you love me, yes you do
I know at night who you run to
You think I haven't got a clue

You say you love me, yes you do
Now that I see you in you
I know all you say isn't true

This Is Not Here

How do I know where to go when I don't know which way I'm facing

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anonymous albert ?
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1 posted 2001-05-26 02:25 AM


graet flow throughout the poem...and the poem itself was nice...thanks for the read...and keep writing... ...?

ahhhhh....i'm addicted to passions in poetry!!!!!

HeAvEnS AnGeL
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since 2001-05-17
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The Hot Girl From Canada
2 posted 2001-05-26 02:40 AM


I liked this poem.
Very sad though
Keep your head up,
Your pen on your paper,
and a smile on your face  

Don't judge a person untill you have walked a mile in their shoes, this way your a mile away from them, and you have their shoes.

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3 posted 2001-05-26 08:01 PM


Quite the sad poem here. Hope it gets better.

I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust.

I'm in love with my shadow
I admire it daily

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