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Teen Poetry #4

Empty Moon

LoneWolf
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since 2001-03-10

Posts 384
IL

0 posted 2001-05-25 08:07 PM

“Empty Moon”

The moon above
Shined so bright
Like your love
Guiding me through
The darkest night

But now I am left
To stumble in the darkness

Alone among the shadows
With no guiding stars
Nor the essence of your love
Shining down
From the empty moon above

It's too bad I'm not as wonderful a person as people say I am, because the world could use a few people like that.
I've learned that even when you th

Low Man's Lyric
Member

since 2001-04-03

Posts 236
In a dream

1 posted 2001-05-25 08:17 PM

Well I guess I will be reading more from you! You posted like 3 poems today. Well anyways I really like this poem and it displays how you feel about love and/or that special someone. Now off to your other poem he he.

Give her two red roses, each with a note. The first note says "For the woman I love" and the second, "For my best friend."
~Anonymous

anonymous albert ?

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since 2001-03-23

Posts 2979

2 posted 2001-05-25 09:29 PM

i related to this poem...and your emotions were protrayed imagery very well...great job and keep writing...

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ahhhhh....i'm addicted to passions in poetry!!!!!

Dopey Dope

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Member Patricius

since 2000-08-30

Posts 11132
San Juan, Puerto Rico

3 posted 2001-05-26 06:29 PM

I enjoyed this one. Yet another wonderful poem.

I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust.

I'm in love with my shadow
I admire it daily

Deranger
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since 2000-05-10

Posts 498
Somewhere, between here and there

4 posted 2001-05-26 07:24 PM

This could be a ballad. Don't you hate when something brings you off that cloud? And why is that we always forget the parachute? Hmm.

Well, cool, i can really relate.

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