Teen Poetry #4 |
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existence is futile |
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Godsend_1 Member
since 2001-04-19
Posts 247great state of illinois |
i had this up as a status yesterday on yahoo and i thought i should post this so ppl new wut i meant lol i wrote this like 4 days ago enjoyo!!!! ben redshaw the great out. Existence is futile Is what I hear them say Existence is futile I never bothered living anyway Existence is futile Why ever say that Life is grand a gift from above Life, love, turmoil Treasures not meant to be scorned Turmoil you say A gift or a treasure Never and no way But think and ponder and understand Turmoil is actually a friend It hurt yes and makes you yell Hey come on now Think of how strong you are Skin so tough you look like a rhino A person mocks you You block the evil shot And protect your heart You are tough A man among men A woman among women The one that only That can fight for yourself So go fight And praise life And forever know Existence isn’t futile i am what i am and that is all that i am and all that i shall ever be..so deal with it |
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anonymous albert ?![]()
since 2001-03-23
Posts 2979 |
i really liked this one...the meaning behind this poem was great...and youw rote it nicely...thansk for sharing it and keep writing... ![]() ahhhhh....i'm addicted to passions in poetry!!!!! |
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punkrockerrobin![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]()
since 2001-05-15
Posts 1180Sparks, NV |
great poem ben! robin I AM WHAT I AM SO DEAL! |
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fearing-laughter Senior Member
since 2001-04-24
Posts 605land of cheese (Wisconsin) |
hey, this was cool! these days people get carried away in damning life, and just take it for granted. your poem has a good message that life is a precious gift that should be embraced and not hated. it's good to know there are optimistic like you :-) thanks for sharing this poem. -fear- |
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kaile![]() ![]()
since 2000-02-06
Posts 5146singapore |
the title pulled me in and i liked the way how you showed us your sense of humour while trying to deliver such an important message... ![]() |
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Dopey Dope![]()
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Member Patricius
since 2000-08-30
Posts 11132San Juan, Puerto Rico |
Not your best poem, but still a good read. ![]() I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust. |
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