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Godsend_1
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since 2001-04-19

Posts 247
great state of illinois

0 posted 2001-05-26 01:40 AM

I saw a woman yesterday
With beauty beyond compare
Gorgouse legs an amazing body
Everything in looks a man could ask for

I talk with her for but a moment
And what I heard made me sick
What I saw in side her soul
Made me want to vomit

She swore and cursed out things
And called my friend evil names
He was mean and cruel
And had a dark black heart

And I left her standing there that day
Smarter then I was before
For if that is what real beauty is
Then I want to be ugly forever

i am what i am and that is all that i am and all that i shall ever be..so deal with it
to make the world the greatest place is the perfect dream in

anonymous albert ?

Member Elite

since 2001-03-23

Posts 2979

1 posted 2001-05-26 02:23 AM

great message!!...and written very well...as it made a turn in the poem...i thought it was creative...great job...and keep writing...

...?

ahhhhh....i'm addicted to passions in poetry!!!!!

HeAvEnS AnGeL
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since 2001-05-17

Posts 168
The Hot Girl From Canada

2 posted 2001-05-26 02:42 AM

I really did like the message of this poem as well. I beleive that true beauty is within your heart and soul.

Don't judge a person untill you have walked a mile in their shoes, this way your a mile away from them, and you have their shoes.

katherine
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since 2000-06-10

Posts 365
Canberra Australia

3 posted 2001-05-26 04:31 AM

this is great! i love the message it holds.
katie

if you don't let them in they can't see the real you

punkrockerrobin

Senior Member

since 2001-05-15

Posts 1180
Sparks, NV

4 posted 2001-05-26 06:54 AM

hey hun i wanna be ugly toooo!
robin

Dopey Dope

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Member Patricius

since 2000-08-30

Posts 11132
San Juan, Puerto Rico

5 posted 2001-05-26 08:05 PM

Great thoughts here. I liked the ending of this one!

I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust.

I'm in love with my shadow
I admire it daily

never_a_princess
Member

since 2001-06-09

Posts 82
Show Me the Money

6 posted 2001-06-10 04:04 PM

bennerz!! *remembers when you showed her this* i love this one hun! gr8 job! *hugz* i love the message behind it..
~Anna *waves*

Fading Away

Member Elite

since 2001-03-14

Posts 3131
Lynchburg, Virginia

7 posted 2001-06-16 02:36 PM

*applauds*
Awesome message! I agree 100% with what this poem is saying. I know that everyone has probably heard this a million times, but it's true... it's not what on that outside, but on the inside that counts. I can't how true this is. Thanks for sharing this, Ben.
Nice work.

--Marie

"You're the girl of my nightmares, erotic and skull-faced.
Anorexic Beauty, feather-weight perfection. Anorexic Beauty, underweight goddess." --Pulp

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