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MoeRocko
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since 2001-04-25
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0 posted 2001-05-26 01:38 AM



Everyday there is a chance
for you
for me
The space I put between us
doesn't keep me warm
The more I think I know
the less I understand
Everything I figured out
I'm learning again

I think it's time for you
for me
theres just so many summers
and so many springs
I know you're still afraid
but together we don't have to be
Cause deep down
You are the one for me

You say you're not lonely on these cold nights
I keep my doors unlocked, and hope that I am right
I know you know we really don't have to fight

I sit with my head in my hands
I can't believe it's happened again
Try to remember how to start over
Don't know if I can.
I don't know why, from your arms I ran

When I'm out there on my own
where my memories can't find me
Like a circle goes around
I was lost until I found out
what it all comes down to.

It's all nothing
Just me and You
I hope our love
can see us through.

This Is Not Here

How do I know where to go when I don't know which way I'm facing

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anonymous albert ?
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1 posted 2001-05-26 02:21 AM


beautiul poem...i really enjoyed this poem...graet job ...and thanks for sharing and hope to see more...:exoricst:...?

ahhhhh....i'm addicted to passions in poetry!!!!!

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2 posted 2001-05-26 11:26 AM


Beautiful piece here, my friend. It is hard to have a tough relationship, but I believe that love will see you two through. Best of luck, and thanks for sharing.

"Men judge generally more by the eye than by the hand, for everyone can see and few can feel."-Machiavelli

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3 posted 2001-05-26 08:17 PM


Well done on the poem. Lovebug knows her stuff....so yea she's right.

I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust.

I'm in love with my shadow
I admire it daily

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