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Teen Poetry #4

Bleeding Heart

MoeRocko
Member

since 2001-04-25

Posts 166
West Virginia

0 posted 2001-05-26 01:47 PM

People's people
Who know what it's like to be left alone
People's people
You know what it means to be left alone
Like I am today
Not even a call on the telephone

A little love and understanding
It's all we need
But the the distrust and mistunderstanding
of a no good woman
It's causing my heart to bleed

This Is Not Here

How do I know where to go when I don't know which way I'm facing

anonymous albert ?

Member Elite

since 2001-03-23

Posts 2979

1 posted 2001-05-26 03:38 PM

very sad piece...and you put yourself in this poem...i hope things get better for you...and keep writing...

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ahhhhh....i'm addicted to passions in poetry!!!!!

Dopey Dope

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Member Patricius

since 2000-08-30

Posts 11132
San Juan, Puerto Rico

2 posted 2001-05-26 08:46 PM

Sad piece, and I hope all is well.
Hope to see more.

I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust.

I'm in love with my shadow
I admire it daily

Angel Bee
Member

since 2001-01-30

Posts 176
Virginia

3 posted 2001-05-26 09:38 PM

this was deep, i liked it, keep writing. ab

*~"Sometimes I wish I was a little girl again--because bruised knees heal faster than broken hearts."~*

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