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MoeRocko
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since 2001-04-25
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0 posted 2001-05-26 01:47 PM



People's people
Who know what it's like to be left alone
People's people
You know what it means to be left alone
Like I am today
Not even a call on the telephone

A little love and understanding
It's all we need
But the the distrust and mistunderstanding
of a no good woman
It's causing my heart to bleed

This Is Not Here

How do I know where to go when I don't know which way I'm facing

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anonymous albert ?
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1 posted 2001-05-26 03:38 PM


very sad piece...and you put yourself in this poem...i hope things get better for you...and keep writing... ...?

ahhhhh....i'm addicted to passions in poetry!!!!!

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2 posted 2001-05-26 08:46 PM


Sad piece, and I hope all is well.
Hope to see more.

I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust.

I'm in love with my shadow
I admire it daily

Angel Bee
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since 2001-01-30
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3 posted 2001-05-26 09:38 PM


this was deep, i liked it, keep writing. ab

*~"Sometimes I wish I was a little girl again--because bruised knees heal faster than broken hearts."~*

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