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princess^sarah Member
since 2001-01-12
Posts 131melbourne 
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i look up at the dark sky theres one bright star in the sky i wish i could find hapiness but all i can do is cry. theres memories of you in my head theres loneliness in my heart i wish my life wasnt so hard and that we werent so far apart. i miss that fire in your eyes i miss the way you smile you took away that empty feeling and made everyday worthwile. i love you so much that it hurts with all my heart i do and more than anything in this world i hope you still love me too... this is for my b/f mat..... i just found out he's been cheating on me i'm so depressed (edited) i don't give a (edited) if anyone gives me (edited) [This message has been edited by SEA (edited 05-25-2001).] |
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anonymous albert ?
since 2001-03-23
Posts 2979 |
this is a very tough situation...youw rote it so well very real poem...hoep thinsg get better and...never stop writing sarah...stay strong!...  ..?if i die before i wake , i pray the lord my soul will take-"when thugs cry" |
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vixengrl04 Member
since 2001-04-26
Posts 495East Haddam, CT |
Awwwww hun this is sad. Sounds like a tough situation, but it won't be the end of your world. Hope you get through it well, and I wish the best for you.  ~*Nikki*~ ~*Of all the millions of people in the world, I'm just me.*~ |
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the_rescue Member
since 2001-05-23
Posts 316Japan |
Hey the poem was good and well written and the situation well it stinks, dont give up. |
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fearing-laughter Senior Member
since 2001-04-24
Posts 605land of cheese (Wisconsin) |
hey, this is a really good poem. i liked it lots. if your b/f did that to you he obviously doesn't deserve you. i hope your okay, and don't give up. NOBODY is worth killing yourself over. good luck. -fear- |
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HeAvEnS AnGeL Member
since 2001-05-17
Posts 168The Hot Girl From Canada |
Hey babes first off i would like to say the poem was beautifu land it is going in my library but i also want to give you a bit of advice. If your b/f cheated on you i wouldn;t stick around, you may love him but if he did it once and you go back to him he knows he will get away with it a second time and he might do it again. I know it's tough but hunny you gotsta move on keep smiling and writing. Don't judge a person untill you have walked a mile in their shoes, this way your a mile away from them, and you have their shoes. |
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anonymousfemale Member Elite
since 2000-02-02
Posts 2797Limbo |
Hey Sarah, sorry to hear this. Just remember you know where to find me if you need to talk, alright. ~AF~ Stupidity killed the cat. Curiosity was framed. |
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Dopey Dope
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Member Patricius
since 2000-08-30
Posts 11132San Juan, Puerto Rico |
Sounds like a tough time. I liked the poem though and hope things get better.  I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust. |
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lonely*soul Member
since 2001-04-05
Posts 396east haddam (moodus) ct :) |
i know its hard to find sumthing like that out, but ya gotsta move on, like they said^^^ hes done it once, and hell think hell get away with it... srry hun! but you wrote a good poem |
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cherish Senior Member
since 2001-03-25
Posts 1639swimming in fairy floss........... |
aw..this is so sad...i hope you make it through sarah...hang in there darling...we all love you here...  "Life is not long and boring, |
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