Teen Poetry #4 |
Hush Child |
LoneWolf Member
since 2001-03-10
Posts 384IL |
“Hush Child” Hush child… Don’t you worry For your not alone Even in the shadows You shall always have my hand to hold Hush child… still you tears for within this maze there shall be a light though you may not see it yet in the end it will be alright Hush child… You have nothing to fear Nothing we see Is quite what its seems And if ever you need me I shall be there Hush child… There is no need to hide For it only keeps you From the freedom you desire So come with me I shall guide you to the starting place Hush child… And don’t you fret You will make it through this Just be strong And in the end you will know That you could make it all along It's too bad I'm not as wonderful a person as people say I am, because the world could use a few people like that. |
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Low Man's Lyric Member
since 2001-04-03
Posts 236In a dream |
I enjoyed this poem and the last two lines ended it well. Hope to see more from you. Give her two red roses, each with a note. The first note says "For the woman I love" and the second, "For my best friend." |
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anonymous albert ?
since 2001-03-23
Posts 2979 |
i liked the positive tone...to this poem...graet job on writing this...i liked it alot...thanks for sharing and hope to see more... ...? ahhhhh....i'm addicted to passions in poetry!!!!! |
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Dopey Dope
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Member Patricius
since 2000-08-30
Posts 11132San Juan, Puerto Rico |
The positive tone to this poem really appeals to me. I enjoyed this poem a lot. Hope to see more. I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust. |
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Deranger Member
since 2000-05-10
Posts 498Somewhere, between here and there |
"positive vibes" hehe. I like this. Almost a lullaby... Spreading insanity, one post at a time |
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