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the_rescue
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0 posted 2001-05-25 01:49 PM


Yes guys this is another rebutal, to stick up for us guys.

Ok why are girls so confusing
you change your mind 50 times a day
I swear you think it's amusing
to watch us try to find our way.

Our way you ask well let me tell you
it's not that we don't want to stop for directions
trust me it's the first thing we want to do
but you fill it with all sorts of complications.

What complications you ask
It's to dirty you can't stop there
wait i have to accomlish this task
and then maybe fix my hair.

Ok now that, that point is done lets move ahead
you ask us what we think of your new dress
I just wish at that point in time I was dead
cause no matter what we say it ends up a mess.

We say 'I think it looks good on you'
'NO you don't your lying to me' is your reply
We say, "honestly it looks bad it will never do"
your answer,"you don't love me you only make me cry

Why do you take so long getting ready
your in the bathroom for what seems forever  
can you not hold the curling iron steady
for we seldom make our resevations if ever.

I think that you're so much more confusing
yeah though you take forever and anything I forgot?
Anyways I will always think your amusing,
even if you cry alot


[This message has been edited by the_rescue (edited 05-25-2001).]

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1 posted 2001-05-25 01:53 PM


babe!!!!!!! you mean hun! lol! anyways you tell me all that everyday! i know you think we confusin! but i love ya even if ya do write a retaliation to my poems lol! love ya!
robin  

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the_rescue
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2 posted 2001-05-25 02:03 PM


ps girls no offense ok

in the silence of the night I hear angels voices singing your name oh how beautiful is your name as they sing over and over.  (SPOKEN)

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3 posted 2001-05-25 02:51 PM


Eh, none taken. We ARE confusing. But that's cause 9 times outa 10 we're confused ourselves...so it just so happens it's easy to confuse everyone else too. Oh well, guys have their faults as well!! hehe
Keep writing.

Jenn

"If it's wrong to love you, then my heart just won't let me be right, cause I'm drowned in you, and I won't pull through without you by my side." Mari

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4 posted 2001-05-25 04:33 PM


hahaha...yup!...we GUYs need to fight back!...and this poem was soo true it was hilarious...well it was to me...hahaha ...but anyways...hope to see more...i enjoyed this poem a LOT!... ...?

if i die before i wake , i pray the lord my soul will take-"when thugs cry"

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5 posted 2001-05-26 01:16 AM


hey,
lol i saw the title of the poem and was like "oh great more guys whining about how we're all confusing blah blah blah" but this one was actually amusing, and you do have a point.  i liked the poem lots.
-one of the many confusing girls-

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6 posted 2001-05-26 02:50 AM


LOL this made me laugh.  Gurls can be confusing but guys are the same way, but then again if we all understood eachother there would be no point to life becoz there would be no excitement  

Don't judge a person untill you have walked a mile in their shoes, this way your a mile away from them, and you have their shoes.

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7 posted 2001-05-26 05:11 AM


Hey I like this one alot. Very unique! Im not taking it offensively Im just saying whats on my mind after I read this. Girls have to make more of any effort then you guys do to look good. I mean we use makeup and have to fix our hair and do all that good stuff to IMPRESS you guys so dont take the "confusing" to heart!

"If you should die before me, ask if you could bring a friend."


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8 posted 2001-05-26 06:37 AM


i totally agree with you erin! goodness babe she has a point! lol talk to ya later jimmy.
robin

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9 posted 2001-05-26 08:08 PM


Well I'm a guy but I think i'll stick up for the girls....you know...just so they can like me more  

I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust.

I'm in love with my shadow
I admire it daily

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10 posted 2001-05-26 08:23 PM


haha offence??? NONE TAKEN!  your right, us girls are wicked confusing, but dont worry, like jenn said...we confuse ourselves most of the time too!!!  lol
                     *KiMMiE*

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11 posted 2001-05-26 08:24 PM


(::hit the button::   your npoems are just cute..not all deep in thought ya know??  all good,  hehe
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12 posted 2001-05-26 09:43 PM


ok first-- girls, yes, can be confusing, but guys are even worse. you tell girls lies that break hearts. and guys never call a girl when they're waiting for the call. when you don't call a girl assumes two things, that you're mad at her or that somethings happend. that just makes me the maddest. guys i think are sooo much more confusing and LAZY than girls. atleast we want to accomplish the task! THANK YOU!   I'm sticking up for us girls! ha! anyway, well written poem, but i don't agree with it. keep writing(but no anti-girl stuff)! ab

*~"Sometimes I wish I was a little girl again--because bruised knees heal faster than broken hearts."~*

Angel Bee
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13 posted 2001-05-26 09:43 PM


ok first-- girls, yes, can be confusing, but guys are even worse. you tell girls lies that break hearts. and guys never call a girl when they're waiting for the call. when you don't call a girl assumes two things, that you're mad at her or that somethings happend. that just makes me the maddest. guys i think are sooo much more confusing and LAZY than girls. at least we want to accomplish the task! THANK YOU!   I'm sticking up for us girls! ha! anyway, well written poem, but i don't agree with it. keep writing(but no anti-girl stuff)! ab

-sorry repost-
*~"Sometimes I wish I was a little girl again--because bruised knees heal faster than broken hearts."~*

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14 posted 2001-05-27 07:28 AM


Heh..nice poem. By the way if a copper appears on your doorstep with a letter saying you have to come to court for being offence, it's from me.   jk

It's good to see guys hitting back. Mind you, a full blown battle of the sexes is not what we need.

Good work.  

~AF~

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Manson - The Fight Song

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15 posted 2001-05-27 12:09 PM


Hehe this was really cute!! I don't think that girls or guys are perfect at all, we all have all faults and I guess its supposed 2 be that way..

~*Nikki*~

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16 posted 2001-05-27 12:23 PM


Hey now, I, Myself am not like that, its just the guyz I date that get confused easily. I come out and tell them exactly what I want (Or, in most cases, don't want) and they still dont have a clue. Maybe guyz should sit down and think about the words a girl says to them  

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you got the face to back it up

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17 posted 2001-05-27 04:32 PM


okay okay okay....

girls are confusing, but look at guys!! they are more confusing!! if you really wanted to be on time to a movie or reservation or whatever, you should not be dating, lol. I can honestly say I don't take that long to get ready, but I do have to call my friends and tell them where I'm going, who I'm going with, and all the details of everything. why? cuz I'm excited to be going!!!  
keep writing!!!  
*s*
Stace


I'm just glad that now this rainstorm has ended, and I can see the rainbow once again.

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18 posted 2001-05-27 05:02 PM


Haha!  And they think it's SO easy to be a guy...well, we have to put up with THEM! heh.

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19 posted 2001-05-27 11:53 PM


Angel Bee your comments are so based upon common generalization of men. You can't apply that to ALL men.

Anyway...personally I dislike men. I think we have to uphold this false image of being tough and rough. I also think that teenage boys are very cruel to girls and vice-versa.
However, I am not saying EVERYBODY is like this......oh well

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20 posted 2001-05-28 02:21 AM


hey dopey when did you become a girl?
robin

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21 posted 2001-05-28 02:36 AM


lol this was cute...keep posting

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22 posted 2001-05-28 04:05 AM


I didn't become one hehe....I just see all the pain and hurt immature boys cause upon trusting girls.
Yet, I also see some cold ice princess's do they fair share of heart breaking.
Anyway I guess it comes with the age.

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23 posted 2001-05-28 10:52 AM


Battle of the sexes... umm Men would win of course... *runs away before he is beaten up*   j/k... Women would win hands down by the fact that men can't have children and therefore there numbers would dwindle whilst women would be able to reproduce ( although I guess they would need at least one man...   )
Great poem by the way very funny indeed :0
Zu

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24 posted 2001-05-28 12:09 PM


Ha ha ha...

Give her two red roses, each with a note. The first note says "For the woman I love" and the second, "For my best friend."  
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25 posted 2001-05-28 12:23 PM


ohhhh, this is sooo amusing...

i agree totally...

girls must be the most complex creatures on earth

yet we can't live without them

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26 posted 2001-05-28 12:24 PM


i forgot to say

thats very objective thinking, javier

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27 posted 2001-05-28 02:43 PM


javi is just taking our side so he don't get beat up! lol
robin

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28 posted 2001-05-28 02:44 PM


I guess.....oh well  
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29 posted 2001-05-31 08:45 AM


there is no side takin lol
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