Teen Poetry #4 |
Trust |
the_rescue Member
since 2001-05-23
Posts 316Japan |
I lie I lie is all that you say you never even give me the benifit of the doubt you take my words and through them aways you say that lying is all I'm about I did it once but not this time but you don't believe me you try me and convict me of this crime when in all actuallity I should be free. you know I'm sorry for things of the past but do those things have to strangle and bind do they always have to hold tight and fast you classify me with a group out side my own kind Just once would you learn how to trust to forget that which is behind and continue on with out breakin my heart causeing it to bust before you know it all that was will be gone. I'm sorry that's all I can really say to you but those words you push away and discard so what exactly is there for me to do why do always have to make things so hard i guess that's all I really have to say my heart is broke and you don't care not that you'll ever read this anyway but these are the feelings I would share. thanx mom |
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punkrockerrobin
since 2001-05-15
Posts 1180Sparks, NV |
babe i know lifw is hard! i'm always here for you ,you know that!love ya! Robin I AM WHAT I AM SO DEAL! |
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the_rescue Member
since 2001-05-23
Posts 316Japan |
guys sorry this isn't my peachy stuff just not having that good of a day is all peace out. |
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anonymous albert ?
since 2001-03-23
Posts 2979 |
no...i really like that u share what u are no one is always happy there will be sad and this showed part of it...i enjoyed it and mine are all depressing ...hehe but thanks for sharing it...no need for sorryies...keep writing... ...? if i die before i wake , i pray the lord my soul will take-"when thugs cry" [This message has been edited by anonymous albert ? (edited 05-24-2001).] |
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Chel Senior Member
since 2000-07-01
Posts 511Baltimore, MD, USA |
Nice piece. Kind of reminds me of something I would write. Well keep up the great work. Chel "True friends stab you in the front." |
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Dopey Dope
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Member Patricius
since 2000-08-30
Posts 11132San Juan, Puerto Rico |
Not your best, but I did feel this one had some sad thoughts in this one. Hope all goes well. I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust. |
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HeAvEnS AnGeL Member
since 2001-05-17
Posts 168The Hot Girl From Canada |
Hey sweetie Don't worrie hun things will get better since im here, i promise Just put a smile on the cute face of yours and the whole world will shine. |
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xShUgArHiGhx
since 2000-09-26
Posts 3150tRyIn tO fIt iN2 mY oWn ShoEs |
one lil mistake can come back to haunt ya i guess..well if you didnt lie like you say then the truth will eventually show its face...and that person will realize that they were all wrong in accusing you of lying so dont worry...the truth will shine through |
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anonymousfemale Member Elite
since 2000-02-02
Posts 2797Limbo |
It always helps to get this stuff out. I hope things look up for you. Thanks for sharing this. ~AF~ Life is a mystery to be lived, not a problem to be solved." |
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the_rescue Member
since 2001-05-23
Posts 316Japan |
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