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the_rescue
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0 posted 2001-05-24 03:20 PM


I lie I lie is all that you say
you never even give me the benifit of the doubt
you take my words and through them aways
you say that lying is all I'm about
I did it once but not this time
but you don't believe me
you try me and convict me of this crime
when in all actuallity I should be free.

you know I'm sorry for things of the past
but do those things have to strangle and bind
do they always have to hold tight and fast
you classify me with a group out side my own kind
Just once would you learn how to trust
to forget that which is behind and continue on
with out breakin my heart causeing it to bust
before you know it all that was will be gone.

I'm sorry that's all I can really say to you
but those words you push away and discard
so what exactly is there for me to do
why do always have to make things so hard
i guess that's all I really have to say
my heart is broke and you don't care
not that you'll ever read this anyway
but these are the feelings I would share.

thanx mom

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1 posted 2001-05-24 03:23 PM


babe i know lifw is hard! i'm always here for you ,you know that!love ya!
Robin

I AM WHAT I AM SO DEAL!

the_rescue
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2 posted 2001-05-24 03:26 PM


guys sorry this isn't my peachy stuff just not having that good of a day is all peace out.
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3 posted 2001-05-24 04:12 PM


no...i really like that u share what u are no one is always happy there will be sad and this showed part of it...i enjoyed it and mine are all depressing ...hehe but thanks for sharing it...no need for sorryies...keep writing... ...?

if i die before i wake , i pray the lord my soul will take-"when thugs cry"

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Chel
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4 posted 2001-05-24 04:21 PM


Nice piece.  Kind of reminds me of something I would write.  Well keep up the great work.

Chel

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"You are special and unique in your own way." "Always remember compliments you received; forget about the rude

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5 posted 2001-05-24 05:12 PM


Not your best, but I did feel this one had some sad thoughts in this one. Hope all goes well.

I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust.

I'm in love with my shadow
I admire it daily

HeAvEnS AnGeL
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6 posted 2001-05-24 06:49 PM


Hey sweetie
Don't worrie hun things will get better
since im here, i promise  
Just put a smile on the cute face of yours and the whole world will shine.

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7 posted 2001-05-29 02:10 PM


one lil mistake can come back to haunt ya i guess..well if you didnt lie like you say then the truth will eventually show its face...and that person will realize that they were all wrong in accusing you of lying so dont worry...the truth will shine through  
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8 posted 2001-05-30 07:27 AM


It always helps to get this stuff out. I hope things look up for you.
Thanks for sharing this.  

~AF~

Life is a mystery to be lived, not a problem to be solved."
-Van Kaam

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9 posted 2001-05-31 08:37 AM


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