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why are guys so confusing?
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why are guys so confusing? |
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punkrockerrobin 
since 2001-05-15
Posts 1180Sparks, NV 
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Why are guys so drn confusing? you never tell us how you feel. you never try to learn from us. we try and we try but we still just don't understand! we tell ya to ask for directions do you? no you have to be stubborn and get lost! we ask you to do something for us, in a half an hour it's still not done! ok so i know we can be confusing to. but at least we tell you how we feel, ask for directions, and do stuff when told. boys all we ask is this,be men! tell us how you feel. do something for us when we ask pleaseeeeeeeeeeeeee and most importantly ask for directions! Robin  I AM WHAT I AM SO DEAL! |
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Dopey Dope
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Member Patricius
since 2000-08-30
Posts 11132San Juan, Puerto Rico |
Well gee....I hope *I*'m a man....hehe well done...and yea....some guys are just blah.  I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust. |
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anonymous albert ?
since 2001-03-23
Posts 2979 |
intersting poem...yea...some guys are just...blah...like dopey there  ...but keep writing...  ...?if i die before i wake , i pray the lord my soul will take-"when thugs cry" [This message has been edited by anonymous albert ? (edited 05-25-2001).] |
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zarina Member
since 2001-05-19
Posts 180 |
Not your best poem, but I can agree on the message! |
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punkrockerrobin
since 2001-05-15
Posts 1180Sparks, NV |
i know it's not my best but had to write it! Robin  I AM WHAT I AM SO DEAL! |
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Jenn Cirrincione
since 2000-07-02
Posts 2107Fl |
HAHA yeah some guys do suck. this is the thing Boys=suck, stoopid, dumb...immature etc Men= wonderful, mature, fun to be with, "slightly" less confusing  You just gotta find the right ones. Keep writing Jenn "If it's wrong to love you, then my heart just won't let me be right, cause I'm drowned in you, and I won't pull through without you by my side." Mari |
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anonymous albert ?
since 2001-03-23
Posts 2979 |
guess...that makes me a man  if i die before i wake , i pray the lord my soul will take-"when thugs cry" |
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punkrockerrobin
since 2001-05-15
Posts 1180Sparks, NV |
maybe i should rephrase my poem lol! if you are of the species you're just plain confusing! robin I AM WHAT I AM SO DEAL! |
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anonymousfemale Member Elite
since 2000-02-02
Posts 2797Limbo |
Not all guys don't ask for directions. Pretty good poem though. Thanks for the read. ~AF~ Stupidity killed the cat. Curiosity was framed. |
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punkrockerrobin
since 2001-05-15
Posts 1180Sparks, NV |
ha not all guys whatever! all guys! robin I AM WHAT I AM SO DEAL! |
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banburycross Senior Member
since 2001-03-27
Posts 946viginia |
due to some of your recent work, it seems that guys are not your favorite things recently, and i can respect that. that's why all my friends are female  anyway, cute piece, keep postingSometimes, the things that go unsaid are the only things worth hearing. |
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Allan Riverwood
since 2001-01-04
Posts 3502Winnipeg |
Ok well, you say "be men" but in the poem you talk about how men are not quite what they should be. Was this intentional? I didn't enjoy the poem much as a poem itself, but I expect that what you were communicating was intended to be the main focus of the poem. Therefore I'm irrelevant, I'm not the target audience. ~Allan Build a man a fire, and he's warm for a day. Set a man on fire, and he'll be warm for the rest of his life. |
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