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MoeRocko
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0 posted 2001-05-24 10:20 PM



One by one the penguins steal my sanity
Is all this thinking really vanity?
On their bellies they start sliding.
  On their backs, my mind is riding
I'm tired of arguing and I'm not siding
These penguins are driving me insane!
I'm not listening to you, your talk is vain.
How bout I push you down the drain.
Then I won't be reminded of my pain...

This Is Me and Megs colab.... it makes no sense but Tis cool nevertheless.....  

This Is Not Here

How do I know where to go when I don't know which way I'm facing

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cherish
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swimming in fairy floss...........
1 posted 2001-05-24 10:25 PM


hahaha..i dont kow whether to laugh or to be serious!!...i really enjoyed this one...i know that it could be read on a deeper level..but for now im going to thank you for managing to make me laugh..

"Life is not long and boring,
it's short and compelling." -Javier Agosto-

fearing-laughter
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2 posted 2001-05-25 01:06 AM


hey  u stold my shirt! lol did you get the shirt that says "one by one the penguins steal my sanity"?? that's my favorite shirt.  i was thinking about writing a weird poem about it, but i couldn't think of one.  i think you did the penguins proud on this one.  (hopefully you have some idea what i'm talking about) good poem! yay 4 u!
-fear-

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3 posted 2001-05-25 02:02 AM


this was creatiove and great collab...you guys worked well together...keep writing and thanks for sharing... ...?

if i die before i wake , i pray the lord my soul will take-"when thugs cry"

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4 posted 2001-05-25 04:33 AM


Yea you  stole my sticker.....my sticker is the first line.
Well.....nicely done. Fun poem and i liked it.

I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust.

I'm in love with my shadow
I admire it daily

katherine
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5 posted 2001-05-25 08:21 AM


this is so cool. this is fully awesome. i love things that don't make sense(sometimes). well done.
katie

anonymousfemale
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6 posted 2001-05-25 12:36 PM


This is great! Very cool. Penguins are the funkiest animals in the world apart from the Polar bear.  

It's a very cool collaboration. Hope to see more work like this.  

~AF~

Stupidity killed the cat. Curiosity was framed.
~ Unknown ~

the_rescue
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7 posted 2001-05-25 01:28 PM


no WAY you have the penguin problem too. no just kidding mine is more along the lines of kiwi but that's alright Great poem
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8 posted 2001-05-25 04:28 PM


I am not alone!!!! *celebrates*
Coooool poem.
  ~Carly

"Go outside and use your own eyes. You'll be surprised to see things you've never been taught..."
   ~Edouard Manet

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9 posted 2001-05-25 04:29 PM


carly's back

if i die before i wake , i pray the lord my soul will take-"when thugs cry"

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10 posted 2001-05-29 06:13 PM


That was a good read.
I don't know why you chose penguins though
would appreciate an explanation to that
keep sharing

I'm so sorry for doubting you Kit ... please forgive me!!!!

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