Teen Poetry #4 |
Penguins on the Brain |
MoeRocko Member
since 2001-04-25
Posts 166West Virginia |
One by one the penguins steal my sanity Is all this thinking really vanity? On their bellies they start sliding. On their backs, my mind is riding I'm tired of arguing and I'm not siding These penguins are driving me insane! I'm not listening to you, your talk is vain. How bout I push you down the drain. Then I won't be reminded of my pain... This Is Me and Megs colab.... it makes no sense but Tis cool nevertheless..... This Is Not Here |
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cherish Senior Member
since 2001-03-25
Posts 1639swimming in fairy floss........... |
hahaha..i dont kow whether to laugh or to be serious!!...i really enjoyed this one...i know that it could be read on a deeper level..but for now im going to thank you for managing to make me laugh.. "Life is not long and boring, |
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fearing-laughter Senior Member
since 2001-04-24
Posts 605land of cheese (Wisconsin) |
hey u stold my shirt! lol did you get the shirt that says "one by one the penguins steal my sanity"?? that's my favorite shirt. i was thinking about writing a weird poem about it, but i couldn't think of one. i think you did the penguins proud on this one. (hopefully you have some idea what i'm talking about) good poem! yay 4 u! -fear- |
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anonymous albert ?
since 2001-03-23
Posts 2979 |
this was creatiove and great collab...you guys worked well together...keep writing and thanks for sharing... ...? if i die before i wake , i pray the lord my soul will take-"when thugs cry" |
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Dopey Dope
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Member Patricius
since 2000-08-30
Posts 11132San Juan, Puerto Rico |
Yea you stole my sticker.....my sticker is the first line. Well.....nicely done. Fun poem and i liked it. I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust. |
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katherine Member
since 2000-06-10
Posts 365Canberra Australia |
this is so cool. this is fully awesome. i love things that don't make sense(sometimes). well done. katie |
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anonymousfemale Member Elite
since 2000-02-02
Posts 2797Limbo |
This is great! Very cool. Penguins are the funkiest animals in the world apart from the Polar bear. It's a very cool collaboration. Hope to see more work like this. ~AF~ Stupidity killed the cat. Curiosity was framed. |
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the_rescue Member
since 2001-05-23
Posts 316Japan |
no WAY you have the penguin problem too. no just kidding mine is more along the lines of kiwi but that's alright Great poem |
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Child of the Stars
since 2000-09-07
Posts 1658Ann Arbor, MI |
I am not alone!!!! *celebrates* Coooool poem. ~Carly "Go outside and use your own eyes. You'll be surprised to see things you've never been taught..." |
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anonymous albert ?
since 2001-03-23
Posts 2979 |
carly's back if i die before i wake , i pray the lord my soul will take-"when thugs cry" |
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Acies
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Member Rara Avis
since 2000-06-07
Posts 7665Twilight Zone |
That was a good read. I don't know why you chose penguins though would appreciate an explanation to that keep sharing I'm so sorry for doubting you Kit ... please forgive me!!!! |
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