Teen Poetry #4 |
I can't say goodbye |
TopGunLauren Senior Member
since 2000-08-02
Posts 718California |
I can't deal with you leaving I need you to stay, But I know you have to go no matter how much I pray. You never will be able to understand how much I care, And how living life with out you I will not be able to bare. Thinking about the day you leave make my heart feel like it's getting stabbed with a knife, The day you walk away from me will be the saddist day of my life. Without you in my life I don't know what I'm going to do, Because I finally realized how much I really love you. When you walk out of my life I'm going to want to die, Because the worse feeling in the world will have to be saying goodbye. By, Lauren This poem was hard for me to write because I wrote it's about one of my friends experiences and I hope she likes it! |
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DancinQueen
since 2000-07-29
Posts 1092Kokomo,IN,USA |
dont worry...loved it thank you **You can't always trust the people you want to** |
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HeAvEnS AnGeL Member
since 2001-05-17
Posts 168The Hot Girl From Canada |
beautiful hope your okay tho |
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anonymous albert ?
since 2001-03-23
Posts 2979 |
very emotional poem...i enjoyed the poem and the situation is a sad one...but inhope everything works ouyt for u and all if i die before i wake , i pray the lord my soul will take-"when thugs cry" |
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Dopey Dope
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Member Patricius
since 2000-08-30
Posts 11132San Juan, Puerto Rico |
Quite the emotional piece. I hope everything runs smoothly. I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust. |
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xShUgArHiGhx
since 2000-09-26
Posts 3150tRyIn tO fIt iN2 mY oWn ShoEs |
This was beautiful and so sad...Kiley this is about u??? N e way this was a great poem |
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TopGunLauren Senior Member
since 2000-08-02
Posts 718California |
Thanx for all your perlies! Lauren |
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DancinQueen
since 2000-07-29
Posts 1092Kokomo,IN,USA |
perlies?? lol **You can't always trust the people you want to** |
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LoneWolf Member
since 2001-03-10
Posts 384IL |
Wow, i really liked this one. i can relate. great job. It's too bad I'm not as wonderful a person as people say I am, because the world could use a few people like that. |
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Acies
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Member Rara Avis
since 2000-06-07
Posts 7665Twilight Zone |
~*hugs*~ hope things work out for you thanks for sharing I'm so sorry for doubting you Kit ... please forgive me!!!! |
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