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TopGunLauren
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since 2000-08-02

Posts 718
California

0 posted 2001-05-24 12:33 PM

I can't deal with you leaving I need you to stay,
But I know you have to go no matter how much I pray.

You never will be able to understand how much I care,
And how living life with out you I will not be able to bare.

Thinking about the day you leave make my heart feel like it's getting stabbed with a knife,
The day you walk away from me will be the saddist day of my life.

Without you in my life I don't know what I'm going to do,
Because I finally realized how much I really love you.

When you walk out of my life I'm going to want to die,
Because the worse feeling in the world will have to be saying goodbye.
By,
Lauren

This poem was hard for me to write because I wrote it's about one of my friends experiences and I hope she likes it!

DancinQueen

Senior Member

since 2000-07-29

Posts 1092
Kokomo,IN,USA

1 posted 2001-05-24 12:36 PM

dont worry...loved it

thank you

**You can't always trust the people you want to**

HeAvEnS AnGeL
Member

since 2001-05-17

Posts 168
The Hot Girl From Canada

2 posted 2001-05-24 12:46 PM

beautiful

hope your okay tho

anonymous albert ?

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since 2001-03-23

Posts 2979

3 posted 2001-05-24 01:06 AM

very emotional poem...i enjoyed the poem and the situation is a sad one...but inhope everything works ouyt for u and all

if i die before i wake , i pray the lord my soul will take-"when thugs cry"

Dopey Dope

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Member Patricius

since 2000-08-30

Posts 11132
San Juan, Puerto Rico

4 posted 2001-05-24 03:52 AM

Quite the emotional piece. I hope everything runs smoothly.

I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust.

I'm in love with my shadow
I admire it daily

xShUgArHiGhx

Member Elite

since 2000-09-26

Posts 3150
tRyIn tO fIt iN2 mY oWn ShoEs

5 posted 2001-05-24 07:56 AM

This was beautiful and so sad...Kiley this is about u??? N e way this was a great poem

TopGunLauren
Senior Member

since 2000-08-02

Posts 718
California

6 posted 2001-05-24 09:27 PM

Thanx for all your perlies!
Lauren

DancinQueen

Senior Member

since 2000-07-29

Posts 1092
Kokomo,IN,USA

7 posted 2001-05-24 11:31 PM

perlies?? lol

**You can't always trust the people you want to**

LoneWolf
Member

since 2001-03-10

Posts 384
IL

8 posted 2001-05-25 07:37 PM

Wow, i really liked this one. i can relate. great job.

It's too bad I'm not as wonderful a person as people say I am, because the world could use a few people like that.
I've learned that even when you th

Acies

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Member Rara Avis

since 2000-06-07

Posts 7665
Twilight Zone

9 posted 2001-05-29 06:24 PM

~*hugs*~

hope things work out for you
thanks for sharing

I'm so sorry for doubting you Kit ... please forgive me!!!!

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