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since 2001-05-17

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Lost in my own world

0 posted 2001-05-24 09:52 AM

Lost Holding On

I'm here all alone
No where to go
No where to turn
Just heading down
This one-way road
Lost in this world
That's still spinnin 'round
I've been knocked down
With my feet on the ground

I just can't find a way
To let it all go
All my thoughts
All my feelings
I'm on my own
Don't know how
To fill this emptiness
Seems like my life
Is just a big mess

I try to find my way
But I see nothing
One day, somehow
I'll find something
For right now
This will have to do
Holding my dreams
Of me and you.

**One of the most adventurous things left for us is to go to sleep. For no one can lay a hand on our dreams.**

© Copyright 2001 Renee - All Rights Reserved

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since 2001-05-23

Posts 316
Japan

1 posted 2001-05-24 10:41 AM

good stuff I enjoyed it.

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since 2000-09-26

Posts 3150
tRyIn tO fIt iN2 mY oWn ShoEs

2 posted 2001-05-24 02:31 PM

I really like the title you chose for the poem, i thought it fit it nicely. Good job and keep em comin!

HeAvEnS AnGeL
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since 2001-05-17

Posts 168
The Hot Girl From Canada

3 posted 2001-05-24 03:52 PM

This was a good poem
i lokie poems that i can relate to
becoz they remind me of past experiences
and how much better things are now

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Posts 2979

4 posted 2001-05-24 04:15 PM

nice...i enjoyed this poem quite a bit...thanks for sharing it...

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if i die before i wake , i pray the lord my soul will take-"when thugs cry"

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Member Patricius

since 2000-08-30

Posts 11132
San Juan, Puerto Rico

5 posted 2001-05-24 05:10 PM

Well done, very well done. I really liked the ending of it all. It really hit me.
Keep them coming.

I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust.

I'm in love with my shadow
I admire it daily

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since 2001-03-10

Posts 384
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6 posted 2001-05-24 10:33 PM

wow, i liked this. i can relate. good job here/

It's too bad I'm not as wonderful a person as people say I am, because the world could use a few people like that.
I've learned that even when you th

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Member Rara Avis

since 2000-06-07

Posts 7665
Twilight Zone

7 posted 2001-05-29 01:57 PM

Much appreciated read. This is a good write and enjoyable too. keep posting

I'm so sorry for doubting you Kit ... please forgive me!!!!

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