Unspoken - pipTalk Forums

How to Join	Member's Area	Private Library	Search	Sanctuary		Login
Main Forums	Discussion	Tech Talk	Mature Content	Archives	A home without a wall, Our haven without ends, A circle we all call Our Family of Friends!

Raven Skye
Member

since 2001-03-03

Posts 112
.In a House.

0 posted 2001-05-24 04:17 PM

Ahh...this feels good..

Unspoken

So I sit here in silence
Waiting for you..
I can't say a word.
It's so hard to move.

So I sit here in slience
I can see you over there.
So get up and look down.
I run my fingers thru your hair.

So I sit here in silence
I have to start a new.
It's going to be so hard.
Why'd this happen to you?

So I sit here in silence
Afriad that i didn't say,
that I truely did love you
in every single way.

So I sit here in silence
So confused and in love.
Seeing you in that casket,
I hope to see you up above..

*×´¨`·.×*Raven Skye*×´¨`·.×*
"Can't explain the way that I feel. You are the love I never found." -Cold

anonymous albert ?

Member Elite

since 2001-03-23

Posts 2979

1 posted 2001-05-24 04:22 PM

i the last stanza was awesome...and oveall the poem was filled with emotions...i really enjoyed this poem...and hope to see more...

...?

if i die before i wake , i pray the lord my soul will take-"when thugs cry"

Dopey Dope

Moderator

Member Patricius

since 2000-08-30

Posts 11132
San Juan, Puerto Rico

2 posted 2001-05-24 05:14 PM

WOw this was so sad. It hit me hard.
I hope this didn't really happen to you. If so, then my condolences....
If not, then something must be up there and I hope everything gets better.

I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust.

I'm in love with my shadow
I admire it daily

xShUgArHiGhx

Member Elite

since 2000-09-26

Posts 3150
tRyIn tO fIt iN2 mY oWn ShoEs

3 posted 2001-05-29 02:27 PM

This was really sad...but its good that you could get yourself up again....great job hun...

zarina
Member

since 2001-05-19

Posts 180

4 posted 2001-05-29 02:53 PM

Very good poem! but so sad.. It really touched me, cause I've been trough times when I was thinking of..things like that.

anonymousfemale
Member Elite

since 2000-02-02

Posts 2797
Limbo

5 posted 2001-05-30 07:37 AM

Oh my...This is so terrible. Wait! The situation not the poem.

Thank you for the read. You've done a great job on it.

~AF~

Life is a mystery to be lived, not a problem to be solved."
-Van Kaam

	⇧ top of page ⇧
All times are ET (US). All dates are in Year-Month-Day format.