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Heavens Tears

Senior Member

since 2001-03-15

Posts 677

0 posted 2001-05-24 09:25 AM

I was born
On a cold November morning
To two people
Who would cease to love each other
And their hate
Always left me in the middle
But they were both so busy
Trying to hurt each other
That they never saw my tears

So I learned
At quite an early age
That life itself
Was not fair and not worth it
So now I am
Stuck all alone in the world
Because my friends are all so busy
Trying to impress everyone else
That they never see my tears

I know now
That these things will never change
And that only I
Can make my life better
So here I am
Trying to break these chains
And you are all so blinded
By your sheltered pasts
That you never saw my tears

*~*Amanda*~*

My tears roll right down my cheeks, but they all soak into my pillow. I feel kinda sorry for it...

Hidden
Junior Member

since 2001-05-17

Posts 18
Lost in my own world

1 posted 2001-05-24 09:33 AM

Since I am your close friend, I have seen your tears all along. But I can't reach out to someone who never grabs hold of my hand. I'm always here just pull me aside and say you wanna talk. I know of your tears because I cry them with you....

**One of the most adventurous things left for us is to go to sleep. For no one can lay a hand on our dreams.**

xShUgArHiGhx

Member Elite

since 2000-09-26

Posts 3150
tRyIn tO fIt iN2 mY oWn ShoEs

2 posted 2001-05-24 02:35 PM

This was really very sad....see your friend saw your tears...

thats what friends are for. Feel better ::hugs::

DarkSilver
Junior Member

since 2001-05-21

Posts 33
Six O'clock High!

3 posted 2001-05-24 02:38 PM

Wow, this makes me so very thankful for my parents, I'm so sorry things were this way for you.

It doesn't matter who you are only who you serve. - Draken O'Larn, the Starwarrior Saga

LCsftball16
Junior Member

since 2001-05-17

Posts 39

4 posted 2001-05-24 04:04 PM

i know exactly how you feel! my parents are going through a bad divorce right now and it just feels like my friends have no idea how it feels even though they are right there every single time i need someone to talk to... hang in there!

anonymous albert ?

Member Elite

since 2001-03-23

Posts 2979

5 posted 2001-05-24 04:16 PM

this poem was awesome...definitly a piece i relate to...its like my life!...wow...i loved this whole poem...hope to see more!...thanks for sharing this...

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if i die before i wake , i pray the lord my soul will take-"when thugs cry"

Chel
Senior Member

since 2000-07-01

Posts 511
Baltimore, MD, USA

6 posted 2001-05-24 04:25 PM

Hey sweetie, keep your head up. I know how you feel. I dont even know my parents. Now a days I fell like I cry all the time. Things will get better and if you ever want to talk just email me. Keep up the great work.

<3 alwayz
Chel

"True friends stab you in the front."
"You are special and unique in your own way." "Always remember compliments you received; forget about the rude

Dopey Dope

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Member Patricius

since 2000-08-30

Posts 11132
San Juan, Puerto Rico

7 posted 2001-05-24 05:16 PM

Very well done....this was so sad. It really got to me. I don't know how this feels at all but I can only imagine the pain you've been through.
I hope you get better.

I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust.

I'm in love with my shadow
I admire it daily

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