Teen Poetry #4 |
Untitled i suppose |
DancinQueen
since 2000-07-29
Posts 1092Kokomo,IN,USA |
Do you ever miss me and I mean truly miss me What about my smile or the way I cared Do you ever think about me and the way i put up with you What about the way I always made you laugh Do you ever realize what you walked away from I'm not like the rest and one day you'll see that You won't be able to go an hour without remembering my smile my laugh my kiss my tears And I hope you'll never forget the way I gave you everything I had -=-=I just found this cleaning out my locker today..not my best but its something new, because I haven't been able to write for awhile.. **You can't always trust the people you want to** |
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Erin Member Elite
since 2000-06-15
Posts 2527~Chicago~ |
DQ~ Damn girl..I like this one alot!! It is really great. You expressed yourself amazingly. Dont feel bad about posting an old poem, go look and see the last time I posted one. I cant write for anything right now. Keep it up girl! "If you should die before me, ask if you could bring a friend." |
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Marshalzu
since 2001-02-15
Posts 2681Lurking |
Good stuff DQ, I really liked it. Zu |
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Jenn Cirrincione
since 2000-07-02
Posts 2107Fl |
Very good...oh boy can I relate!!! Keep em coming, I miss seeing your work!! Jenn "If it's wrong to love you, then my heart just won't let me be right, cause I'm drowned in you, and I won't pull through without you by my side." Mari |
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DancinQueen
since 2000-07-29
Posts 1092Kokomo,IN,USA |
thank you **You can't always trust the people you want to** |
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banburycross Senior Member
since 2001-03-27
Posts 946viginia |
beautiful emotions, i love this poem. you did a really wonderful job on this, i like it a lot keep sharing your work Sometimes, the things that go unsaid are the only things worth hearing. |
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Acies
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Member Rara Avis
since 2000-06-07
Posts 7665Twilight Zone |
~*hugs sweets*~ I'll always be here to talk to hope you get to writing again "So long as men can breathe or eyes can see, |
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Dopey Dope
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Member Patricius
since 2000-08-30
Posts 11132San Juan, Puerto Rico |
This is kinda sad.....Hope things get better for you, but I felt this one. I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust. |
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TopGunLauren Senior Member
since 2000-08-02
Posts 718California |
How is going girl?I read your poems now and understand them a lot more then before.But this poem is sad but also a great piece so keep up the great work and i'll talk to you soon. Love, Lauren |
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anonymous albert ?
since 2001-03-23
Posts 2979 |
i liked the way u wrote your emotions in this one...graet job and keep writing... ...? if i die before i wake , i pray the lord my soul will take-"when thugs cry" |
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~sugarpie313~ Member
since 2000-09-14
Posts 375Maine, USA |
dang... wow... good... LOL that's all i can say. would you mind if i gave this to my ex? well... i'm not gonna give it to him, more like, um how shall we say, putting it somewhere where he'll see it. like on his dashboard. hahaha jk this was WONDERFUL!!!!! i love the last 2 lines... that was an awesome clincher. great job. Valerie Why do you do what u do to me baby...you know if I could I'd do anything for you, please don't ignore me cause you know I adore you |
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DancinQueen
since 2000-07-29
Posts 1092Kokomo,IN,USA |
thanks again guys and no i dont mind if u give it to him **You can't always trust the people you want to** |
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xShUgArHiGhx
since 2000-09-26
Posts 3150tRyIn tO fIt iN2 mY oWn ShoEs |
Awww hun this was so sad!! We need to talk hun I hope your doing better ::hugs:: |
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kaile
since 2000-02-06
Posts 5146singapore |
i hope this reply finds you in a better frame of mind.... hugs |
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HeAvEnS AnGeL Member
since 2001-05-17
Posts 168The Hot Girl From Canada |
very nice it's going in my library |
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