Teen Poetry #4 |
My Vow to You (repost from teens #3) |
Tamma
since 2000-01-17
Posts 794In His Arms, Harpers Ferry, WV |
I’ll love you forever, This is my vow to you. I'll hold you close for life, I’ll try my best to smile, No matter why it hurts, This is my vow to you. My love runs deep for you, This is my vow to you. I’ll admit my mistakes, And forget about yours, So we can grow closer, This is my vow to you. I’ll hold you when you need, Let you go if you want, If it kills me or not, This is my vow to you. I’ll love you ‘til I die, This is my vow to you. I’ll forget what they say, And go one loving you, For as long as you want, This is my vow to you. I will not forget you, This is my vow to you. No matter what, it’s true, I love I hold for you, I’ve let you in my heart, This is my vow to you. My love for you won’t die, This is my vow to you. Please, take my hand, and see, Just how deep my love runs, I’ll love you forever, This is my vow to you. ~*~ Tamma Loves WIll ~*~ Those girls on TV don't know that being |
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Dopey Dope
Moderator
Member Patricius
since 2000-08-30
Posts 11132San Juan, Puerto Rico |
Well done Tamma, pretty deep vow. I hope it lasts. I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust. |
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anonymous albert ?
since 2001-03-23
Posts 2979 |
beautifully written...this was nicely told and hope it turns out good somewhat as he does the same vows...wish u luck...and keep writing... ...? if i die before i wake , i pray the lord my soul will take-"when thugs cry" |
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