Teen Poetry #4 |
This my heart! |
punkrockerrobin
since 2001-05-15
Posts 1180Sparks, NV |
This is my heart, being poured out to you. i tell you everything. except the fact...... well i think you know. i love you! you've been through thick and thin with me. you talked to me when no one else would. you made me feel loved. the only time you weren't there, was on the weekends that's only cus, you didn't talk on the weekends. those were the times i missed you. you may not think the same about me , but i had to let you know this. if i hadn't written this then i would be sad. i had to let it out! i had to tell you. this is my heart being poured out to you. i hope you know how much i care. for if we do meet i hope you will love me to! Robin I AM WHAT I AM SO DEAL! |
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knightlyshadows Senior Member
since 2001-04-14
Posts 791obscured vision |
robin this was good. im glad you let the emotion out. the last stanza i loved. good job hun.......and i know *hugs* thanx tiff <~~ mine “A single choice can build destinies,or destroy them.” |
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anonymous albert ?
since 2001-03-23
Posts 2979 |
you guys like...love that frog !eh?...hehe...this poem was great...i enjoyed it quite a bit...thanks for sharing it and hope things turn out good...and keep writing... ...? if i die before i wake , i pray the lord my soul will take-"when thugs cry" |
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Dopey Dope
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Member Patricius
since 2000-08-30
Posts 11132San Juan, Puerto Rico |
Yes, you poured your heart out into this poem. I liked it and hope to see more from you Robin! I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust. |
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xShUgArHiGhx
since 2000-09-26
Posts 3150tRyIn tO fIt iN2 mY oWn ShoEs |
Pouring out your heart shur does take a great weight off your shoulders. Great poem and its good that you revealed all of this |
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punkrockerrobin
since 2001-05-15
Posts 1180Sparks, NV |
tks yall!oh and becca robin I AM WHAT I AM SO DEAL! |
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