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punkrockerrobin
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0 posted 2001-05-24 01:22 AM


This is my heart,
being poured out to you.
i tell you everything.
except the fact......
well i think you know.

i love you!
you've been through thick and thin with me.
you talked to me when no one else would.
you made me feel loved.

the only time you weren't there,
was on the weekends that's only cus,
you didn't talk on the weekends.
those were the times i missed you.

you may not think the same about me ,
but i had to let you know this.
if i hadn't written this then i would be sad.
i had to let it out!
i had to tell you.

this is my heart being poured out to you.
i hope you know how much i care.
for if we do meet i hope you will love me to!

Robin

I AM WHAT I AM SO DEAL!

© Copyright 2001 Robin Hill - All Rights Reserved
knightlyshadows
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1 posted 2001-05-24 01:33 AM


robin this was good. im glad you let the emotion out. the last stanza i loved. good  job hun.......and i know *hugs* thanx
tiff <~~ mine

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Just leave me alone and give me some space.

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2 posted 2001-05-24 02:40 AM


you guys like...love that frog !eh?...hehe...this poem was great...i enjoyed it quite a bit...thanks for sharing it and hope things turn out good...and keep writing... ...?

if i die before i wake , i pray the lord my soul will take-"when thugs cry"

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3 posted 2001-05-24 04:05 AM


Yes, you poured your heart out into this poem. I liked it and hope to see more from you Robin!

I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust.

I'm in love with my shadow
I admire it daily

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4 posted 2001-05-24 07:48 AM


Pouring out your heart shur does take a great weight off your shoulders. Great poem and its good that you revealed all of this  
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5 posted 2001-05-24 03:27 PM


tks yall!oh and becca      
robin

I AM WHAT I AM SO DEAL!

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