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Heavens Tears
since 2001-03-15
Posts 677
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Dont look at me like that You dont know who I am All you see Is that I am not like you Dont treat me like this You dont know how it makes me feel All you know Is that hurting me feels good Dont talk to me like that Like I am any less of a person You should know That I am just as good as you Dont act like you know me Like you have the right to judge me Because only I know Who I really am *~*Amanda*~* My tears roll right down my cheeks, but they all soak into my pillow. I feel kinda sorry for it... [This message has been edited by Heavens Tears (edited 05-22-2001).] |
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SEA 
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Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
Very powerful message here....I like this very much  SEA |
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Dopey Dope
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Member Patricius
since 2000-08-30
Posts 11132San Juan, Puerto Rico |
Looks like you're shutting people out from who you are. You don't have to be the only person that truly knows you. Well done here.  I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust. |
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anonymous albert ?
since 2001-03-23
Posts 2979 |
very true...a strong message was heard...i hope u gave this to the person u wrote it towards...thanks for sharing it...i liekd it...keep writing...  ...?if i die before i wake , i pray the lord my soul will take-"when thugs cry" |
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zarina Member
since 2001-05-19
Posts 180 |
I liked the poem.. I know how it is to feel like no one exept yourself knows who you really are.. |
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xShUgArHiGhx
since 2000-09-26
Posts 3150tRyIn tO fIt iN2 mY oWn ShoEs |
I really liked this one..its sad that no one knows the real you...but people can be so blind and naive sometimes |
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