Teen Poetry #4 |
why write |
Godsend_1 Member
since 2001-04-19
Posts 247great state of illinois |
why write when all i feel is pain all i need is love but all i get is hurt why write when all i do is cry all i want is death and all i get is pain why write about death when you are writing about your want and pain when you are writing about you life why write when all you think and dream and desire and need and yearn for is death so tell me why write when you wish you were dead? i am what i am and that is all that i am and all that i shall ever be..so deal with it |
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Acies
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Member Rara Avis
since 2000-06-07
Posts 7665Twilight Zone |
Every person goes thru that feeling. The question is are you prove to yourself that you are better than this and bounce back up. Why do we write? Maybe cause we know it actually helps us rid of the hurtful feelings. I know that's why I write. So, be strong, keep writing, and one day you'll find the love you deserve. "So long as men can breathe or eyes can see, |
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lonely*soul Member
since 2001-04-05
Posts 396east haddam (moodus) ct :) |
why write?? if y gots all that hurt, it helps it go away and i think ya already know the answer considering your wirting right now *KiMMiE* |
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LoveBug
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Member Elite
since 2000-01-08
Posts 4697 |
Why do we write? Well, everyone has different reasons, but the one universal reason is to express our feelings. From poetry to fiction, everything we write has a piece of ourselves in it. When we have hard times, like you seem to be having, it's more important to keep writing. It's a healthy way of expressing those tough emotions, and it also helps to remind you of who you really are under all of the sadness. Anyway, these feelings are expressed well. I hope you keep writing. "Men judge generally more by the eye than by the hand, for everyone can see and few can feel."-Machiavelli |
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punkrockerrobin
since 2001-05-15
Posts 1180Sparks, NV |
ben you better not die on me hun! who am i gonna have to talk to when i'm all sad? or............heehehe! well anyways cherr up hun! robin I AM WHAT I AM SO DEAL! |
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AngelPoet87 Member
since 2001-04-21
Posts 280Indy |
Wow, I'm.... touched. Well now I really need to talk to you. I'm not going to go on and on over here, so we will discuss this there. Luv ya. |
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Dopey Dope
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Member Patricius
since 2000-08-30
Posts 11132San Juan, Puerto Rico |
Well done on the poem, get better.....write....write...cuz it's better than dying. I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust. |
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anonymous albert ?
since 2001-03-23
Posts 2979 |
this is true and real...and u put it well...but see u gotta see thatw riting actually helps...well it does to me...even tho u discover all the pain and hurt u might find...its the first step of healing...and i think thats important of me as a poet to write...anyways...i liked this made me think...hehe...cya ben...and keep writing... ...? if i die before i wake , i pray the lord my soul will take-"when thugs cry" |
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That girl Megz cant write New Member
since 2001-04-29
Posts 7State: Confusion |
'eY Ben-O! WeLL I am talking to you right now, so I don't reaLLy have much to say...but keEp on writing...and I luv ya...and you are awesome...and...don't forget "when you are sad...HUG ME" hehe... Luv ya!!!! *Megz* |
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xShUgArHiGhx
since 2000-09-26
Posts 3150tRyIn tO fIt iN2 mY oWn ShoEs |
WHy write?? Cuz it helps get feelings and emotions out in a way that speaking never could. Try to stay positive and keep your head up..we're all here for you and keep writing! |
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DarkSilver Junior Member
since 2001-05-21
Posts 33Six O'clock High! |
I have a theory on a spiritual reasoning behind why human beings write. it's probably a little under done and oversimplified though. It doesn't matter who you are only who you serve. - Draken O'Larn, the Starwarrior Saga |
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