Teen Poetry #4 |
bad habit. |
Heaven New Member
since 2001-05-17
Posts 8 |
A STREAM OF SMOKE RISES UP FROM THE FIRE IN MY HAND AND THE ASHES I BREATH TURN MY HEART GREY THE SOOTHING MOTIONS AND THE LONG DEEP BREATHS RELAX MY MIND AND FILL ME WITH POISON SWEET MISERY WHY ARE YOU HERE AND MAKE ME DO THIS |
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SEA
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Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
Welcome! Please cheek your email for a special greeting! and here's hoping you can kick this habit..... SEA |
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lonely*soul Member
since 2001-04-05
Posts 396east haddam (moodus) ct :) |
WELCOME TO PASSIONS yeah...smiking is pretty gross...hope ya can quit! *KiMMiE* |
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obscurity of cloud Member
since 2001-05-11
Posts 294....:::::******:::::.... |
Great first post! Please keep sharing your work. "so when at times the mob is swayed to carry praise or blame too far, we may choose something like a star" --Frost |
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Godsend_1 Member
since 2001-04-19
Posts 247great state of illinois |
awesome poem very col way to decribe it love ya later ben i am what i am and that is all that i am and all that i shall ever be..so deal with it |
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Tamma
since 2000-01-17
Posts 794In His Arms, Harpers Ferry, WV |
WELCOME TO PASSIONS!!! This was a great first post, heop to see more from you Those girls on TV don't know that being |
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banburycross Senior Member
since 2001-03-27
Posts 946viginia |
Welcome to Passions!! wonderful first post, i love the imagery i know you'll love it here and i hope you stay and keep sharing your work with us. i look forward to reading more soon Sometimes, the things that go unsaid are the only things worth hearing. |
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Dopey Dope
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Member Patricius
since 2000-08-30
Posts 11132San Juan, Puerto Rico |
Welcome to passions! I enjoyed your first post and hope to see you post much more as well as reply! I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust. |
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anonymous albert ?
since 2001-03-23
Posts 2979 |
awesome imagery and a great first post...WELCOME!!...hope u like it here and keep writing,posting.reading and (of course) replying...cya~... ...? if i die before i wake , i pray the lord my soul will take-"when thugs cry" |
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xShUgArHiGhx
since 2000-09-26
Posts 3150tRyIn tO fIt iN2 mY oWn ShoEs |
WeLcOmE tO pasSioNs What a wonderful first post this was...cant wait to see more from u! Welcome |
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Acies
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Member Rara Avis
since 2000-06-07
Posts 7665Twilight Zone |
WELCOME TO PASSIONS!!! I'm very impressed with your first post. You are very talented ~*applauds*~ I'm really very impressed thanks for sharing I'm so sorry for doubting you Kit ... please forgive me!!!! |
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