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Heaven
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0 posted 2001-05-18 07:36 PM



A STREAM OF SMOKE RISES UP
FROM THE FIRE IN MY HAND
AND THE ASHES I BREATH
TURN MY HEART GREY
THE SOOTHING MOTIONS
AND THE LONG DEEP BREATHS
RELAX MY MIND
AND FILL ME WITH POISON
SWEET MISERY
WHY ARE YOU HERE
AND MAKE ME DO THIS


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1 posted 2001-05-18 08:00 PM


Welcome!   Please cheek your email for a special greeting!   and here's hoping you can kick this habit.....   SEA
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2 posted 2001-05-18 08:29 PM


WELCOME TO PASSIONS   yeah...smiking is pretty gross...hope ya can quit!
           *KiMMiE*

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3 posted 2001-05-19 12:30 PM


Great first post!  Please keep sharing your work.

"so when at times the mob is swayed to carry praise or blame too far, we may choose something like a star" --Frost

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4 posted 2001-05-19 02:00 AM


awesome poem very col way to decribe it love ya later

ben

i am what i am and that is all that i am and all that i shall ever be..so deal with it
to make the world the greatest place is the perfect dream in

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5 posted 2001-05-19 10:20 AM


WELCOME TO PASSIONS!!!
This was a great first post, heop to see more from you  

Those girls on TV don't know that being
36-24-36 doesn't mean a thing unless
you got the face to back it up

banburycross
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viginia
6 posted 2001-05-19 11:31 AM


Welcome to Passions!!

wonderful first post, i love the imagery    i know you'll love it here and i hope you stay and keep sharing your work with us.  i look forward to reading more soon

Sometimes, the things that go unsaid are the only things worth hearing.

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7 posted 2001-05-19 04:31 PM


Welcome to passions! I enjoyed your first post and hope to see you post much more as well as reply!

I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust.

I'm in love with my shadow
I admire it daily

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8 posted 2001-05-21 02:16 AM


awesome imagery and a great first post...WELCOME!!...hope u like it here and keep writing,posting.reading and (of course) replying...cya~... ...?

if i die before i wake , i pray the lord my soul will take-"when thugs cry"

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9 posted 2001-05-25 10:24 PM


WeLcOmE tO pasSioNs  

What a wonderful first post this was...cant wait to see more from u! Welcome  

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10 posted 2001-05-29 06:28 PM


WELCOME TO PASSIONS!!!

I'm very impressed with your first post.
You are very talented
~*applauds*~
I'm really very impressed  
thanks for sharing

I'm so sorry for doubting you Kit ... please forgive me!!!!

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